Tipsy Wisdoms…

Welcome,

October.

Nice to see you again?

There are certainly times when I think I could read writerly advice for days on end and never absorb enough of it. And those are also the times when I stop and realize that I am procrastinating… such an ugly word for such a fun activity. But in those spans, I do run across much of value, so I thought I would share some of it here in this segment I will call Tipsy Wisdoms. These editions will be periodical (read when I get around to it, <snicker, snicker>) and hopefully fun. Many posts may be from Tumblr, and I choose to do it this way instead of posting my whole Tumblr blog here because they have different foci. That said, I will do my UTMOST to credit the original poster, and hooray!!! for all of these individuals who have put into words the many things we all can use a reminder of. I hope you enjoy Tipsy Wisdoms!

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I thought this listing of synonyms for light all condensed into one place was a fabulous idea! What a great resource! Thanks, linestorm!

This next post is courtesy of fictionadventurer over on Tumblr. It is a healthy reminder of how as writers we can get into our own heads and muck up what doesn’t need to be mucked up… especially for one who fights perfectionism constantly and has high standards like myself. Take it as a gentle nudge~

I think thereโ€™s a tendency for some writers to fall into the mindset that a good story has to have All The Things. Unique and nuanced three-dimensional characters, a completely immersive setting, a structurally flawless plot and pristine prose that conveys a distinct and memorable authorial voice. While itโ€™s good to achieve a basic level of competence in all those things, I think itโ€™s important to remember that no story can deliver everything.

Some of that is pure logicโ€“a story generally canโ€™t have both a snappy, page-turning plot and leisurely pages of vivid description, so a choice has to be made. But also, readers donโ€™t necessarily need perfection in everything. They canโ€™t pay attention to everything. And even the best and most popular books draw in readers by being very good in one or two areas, even if they arenโ€™t necessarily strong in others. Tolkien is praised for his vivid worldbuilding even if some people donโ€™t like his prose styling. People love Austenโ€™s characters and wit even if she tells us next to nothing about her setting. And so on and so forth. I know that there are certain authors I read for their characters or for their masterful prose, and I donโ€™t really care if the other areas are neglected because theyโ€™re not what I came for. And they rank among my favorite books not because theyโ€™re great at everything, but that theyโ€™re really great at that one specific thing.

Itโ€™s okay to have strengths. Maybe you focus a lot of energy on intricate characterization while your descriptions tend toward minimalism. Itโ€™s fineโ€“readers might fall in love with your characters and not mind that their imaginations have to fill in a few extra setting details. Maybe pacing a plot is childโ€™s play while styling a beautiful sentence feels like pulling teeth. Thatโ€™s alright, tooโ€“readers may be so busy turning pages that they donโ€™t mind your purely functional prose. But if youโ€™re spending time agonizing over all the things at once, you may not be able to reach brilliance in any of the areas.

While itโ€™s good to learn the craft and improve your writing, reaching for perfection can be paralyzing. It can lead to endless reading of articles and books about writing, while no actual stories are written. So Iโ€™m thinking this limited approach can helpRather than trying to be the author who writes a Great Book, think about being an author whoโ€™s great at a certain part of writingAnd the rest might not matter as much as youโ€™d feared. original post by fictionadventurer

I’m out,

like a skateboarding Storm Trooper… ~

Human Writing Aides: Critique Partners, Alpha Readers and Beta Readers. What It Takes to Be One and What I Have Learned (Part 1 of 2)

A hot topic in social media writers’ groups these days is critique partners/alpha readers/beta readers, and all aspects about them: what are they and the differences between them; where do you find them; what should you expect from them as an author; what the reader can expect from the authors; should they be paid, and so on. The answers seem to vary widely the more you read about the subject and depending on the source of the information. There is also a fair amount of emotion attached to the subject, and rightly so. Sending your hard-fought literary creation out for perusal by an unknown entity takes cajones, let’s face it, that struggle is very real. Everyone who puts pen to paper wants to be encouraged and viewed positively, but just as in life in general, it’s more often the not-so “Ra-ra! Yes, I love it!” comments that promote growth as a writer.

Text Box: CP or ฮฑ?
Which one do I need?

I read a couple of blog posts on iWriterly and Indies Unlimited recently that described these three human writing aides quite neatly. iWriterlyโ€™s Meg Latorre describes critique partners (CP) as:    

โ€œโ€ฆwriters who provide feedback on your work, usually by request (to exchange chapters).โ€ Meg Latorre, iWriterly, (follow her on YouTube)     

Such a person could easily be confused with Indies Unlimitedโ€™s definition of an alpha reader as someone who reads a work-in-progress in the early stages of compilation, and perhaps even again after a first edit, but before it is sent to a content editor. They go on to say that an alpha readerโ€™s purpose

…is to see if the overall structure of your book works. Are there glaring issues or plot holes large enough to float an ocean liner through? The idea is to have a trusted reader who might spot issues you miss or have a blind spot about. … If you decide to, the sooner in the process the better. You want to limit wasted effort you’ll expend polishing sections that might get reworked or even tossed out based on feedback from the alpha reader.”

Big Al, IndiesUnlimited, (follow them on Twitter)

Both sites agreed that beta readers come later in the process, after at least a few self-edits.  Betas tend to be other readers who have an interest in the genre and are also willing to offer feedback, both positive and negative. They may offer simple line edits in addition to larger concept suggestions, or not, it depends upon the person and what the author is looking for. Many times these details can be discussed and agreed upon before the document is even sent.


Typically, these three feedback sources have not been compensated, but that is changing some as I see freelancers listing them as part of their core services. I believe that there is certainly room for discussion in this realm, as it all boils down simply to someone spending their time for the benefit of another (and hopefully themselves as well). Everyoneโ€™s time has value and that should be taken into consideration. Perhaps there doesnโ€™t have to be an actual transfer of funds, but certainly a signed, messaged copy of the work in its finished form is a well-deserved token.

If you don’t feel that compensation is necessary, that’s cool. I know many don’t.

 Alternatively, a fun way to say thank you could be to gift your reader with a month or a few (depending on the scope of the work) of an appropriate subscription box. I have treated myself to the Scribbler subscription box during the dreary New England winter months, and I loved it. Itโ€™s full of writer-friendly stuff, tips, tools of the trade, and of course, a real BOOK, so it is supporting other authors as well. Finding the type-covered box in the mail always brought a smile to my face, and a few hours of Christmas-in-whenever. Subscription boxes are numerous now, there is one for most every kind of interest, finding one that youโ€™d like to send (or receive, which is how I think about it) shouldnโ€™t be difficult.

Hereโ€™s another, perhaps more practical idea for appreciation (if applicable): compensate the critiquer the amount it would be to upgrade one of their trade memberships a level. Freelancers and industry professionals alike have many organizations to choose to belong to, such as The Editorial Freelancersโ€™ Association, Freelancersโ€™ Union, The Society for Editing (ACES), The Society for Editors and Proofreaders (UK based), and several others, all of which have tiers of membership with associated fees. Levelling up many times allows for the purchase of a course or seminar at a reduced rate, or discounted entry fees to conferences and association gatherings. This way each party is continuing to hone their craft and improve their repertoire. That is truly a gift that keeps on giving!

In a similar vein, if your CP is on Patreon, it couldnโ€™t get any easier! Helping our fellow creative souls toward their goals is a productive way to show support and appreciation. In fact, Iโ€™m investigating this platform myselfโ€ฆ  

Testimonials and/or endorsements of the CP/reader on their website should undoubtedly be part of the authorโ€™s response. Testimonials and reviews are extremely important to members of the freelance community, they help to support our business and bolster our confidence. And yes, even if it is a less positive sentiment, it may help other writers judge if the reader is offering the level of feedback they are looking for. We all gotta take the good and the not-so-goodโ€” if the CP/reader can dish it out, they better be able to take it in return.  

Freelancer’s lifeblood…

One big difference that is noted in these three human aides is their approach of the manuscript- either from a writerโ€™s perspective or a readerโ€™s. Some authors choose to enlist the services of all three, while some only seek out one or two. I can see value in each one depending on the authorโ€™s writing style, time and/or deadlines, and the type of work it is. Some (VERY) basic line editing in the early stages can also reduce copy editing and proofreading costs in the later stages.

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CPโ€™s and alpha readers can often expect to be reading raw, unedited copyโ€”literally right off the pen or keyboard. If you canโ€™t stomach misspellings, a lack of punctuation and often formatting, and imprecise grammar, please, save everyone the frustration and opt for a beta or later stage read instead. You will be SOOOOO much more comfortable! Authors, on the other hand, can receive their feedback in many forms, from list-type replies to in-document notations. But be prepared for some criticism, it is what you should ASK for! This is all just a round-about way of saying that the most important part of the reader/author arrangement is communication about the extent of the feedback.  When each side has expressed what they are looking for and knows their scope, the chances of a positive experience are much better. Which really is the end goal, right?

In the second part of this post, I will discuss the blend of CP and alpha reading (according to the above definitions) I am currently providing for an author halfway around the world from me, and what I have learned from the partnership. Until then, keep writing, reading, and playing with words however you can! ~