The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #28

Hello Everyone! Welcome to September! It doesn’t seem possible that the year is three-quarters gone already. Kids are returning to school around here, school buses have returned to the morning traffic patterns. And now that I look at it, the red maple out my window is showing faint red and purple hues in the leaves. The heat and rain we have had may keep autumn’s arrival on a more normal schedule, but it will come nonetheless. It also should be brilliant! ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ‚ Stay safe and healthy!

So Elahna and Ivy finally reached Irillo and began making their way through the city in the last episode. We learned more about Ivy, too. Though she may be ‘nobility’ as we think of it, she did have an integrated upbringing. Despite being related to Regna Halesia and her mother being part of the Eanneadic Council, Ivy was a street tender and maintains her friendships from those summers spent competing for the Bronze Broom. But let’s get back into Irillo, shall we?~


The din of conversation increased, spilling from an opening on the other side of a tall, slender building of rough cream stucco with deep green timber accents. The sign that hung above the door was unusual; a central lime green lightning bolt pierced silver waves against a sky blue field. The green lightning was what drew my attention.

The sign of a Jival Orderly

โ€œIvy, what does that sign mean? Is there really green lightning?โ€

โ€œThat is the sign of a Jival orderly. They work by detecting irregularities in oneโ€™s life essence and restoring it to balance. The essence is shown as green because they often have abilities with animals and plants as well. House Bios has the element of air, but deals with living beings. Earth magic often colors their workings.โ€

โ€œOh, that does make sense. How would one know to go to them instead of the other orderly?โ€

โ€œWell, generally when nothing else works. Or if there is a head injury or major trauma in the past. Emotional concerns too.โ€

โ€œI see. Thatโ€™s very interesting. I wonder if thatโ€™s who Fife really meant me to see the day they found me. Like Iโ€™d been knocked on the head, or something, talking about other worlds and such.โ€

โ€œMost likely, though Cragbendโ€™s orderly isnโ€™t a Jival, heโ€™s a Mendly. Not much he could have done for you, had you turned out to be touched. Good thing we all believed you.โ€

โ€œYes, good thing.โ€ I said.

So that made me wonder if not everyone would believe me; that I was from another world. Someone could think me mad, after all. Then Iโ€™d have to go see a Jival orderly to โ€˜correct my irregularities.โ€™ I wondered what they would find.

A young woman rounded the corner, entering the traffic flow, a large basket filled with vegetables over one arm and a squawking chicken clutched in the other. Her face reflected embarrassment and she tried tucking the noisy bird backward under her arm to quiet it, which only made it squawk louder.

*Image byย NickyPeย fromย Pixabayย 

โ€œBest put that one right in the pot, fla, else youโ€™ll have no peace!โ€ A passerby advised the flustered girl, which elicited guffaws and laughter from those around us.

The direction she had come from opened up into a broadly crescent-shaped space guarded by an obelisk of mottled white and gray marble. People were packing carts and hauling hand wagons toward the road, while others hefted bags or crates. Whatever had gone on there apparently had finished for the day.

โ€œEach quarter of the city has its own market. Vendors and traders have specific days they attend on, so their customers know when to find them. Many rotate between quarters, but some only visit one or two. They figure out what works best for them. They are wrapping up for today.โ€

We were almost past the market entrance when a sound like water pattering on a crystal chandelier rang out. Ivy reined in abruptly. I followed suit a few paces on.

โ€œElements be, sir, how long until the rain?โ€ Ivy asked an older man pulling a hand wagon.

The manโ€™s gray hair stood out on end around the sides of his head beneath the flattened felt hat he wore. Long, slender, pointed ears fit through slots in the hatโ€™s turned edge. When he gazed up at us, the copper rings piercing the points of his ears glinted in the setting sun. His face had deeply weathered lines around slate gray eyes. Numerous laugh lines framed the smile that blossomed across his lips. It was the kind of face that made me want to smile in return and I found myself doing just that.

โ€œElements be, she of the Arborea. The clock does say we have but half an *erdur until the land gets a bath. Are you heading far?โ€

โ€œNo, just to Forelore. My friend has never been to Irillo, however, so I didnโ€™t want to dawdle too long. My thanks, stay dry yourself this evening.โ€ Ivy nodded slightly, to which the smiling man bowed low.

โ€œThe clock tells the weather?โ€ I asked, a bit in awe.

โ€œEach face of the clock towers in the markets tells a different thing. One face tells time, one tells how long until and what the weather workers have scheduled. That was the rain chime you heard. Another face shows the *anar of the anek of the anos, and the last shows the current astro sign. They are wonders. Each clock and each face is different. Make sure you see them when you are out exploring.โ€ Her eyes slid horizontally toward me. โ€œAnd I know you will.โ€

โ€œWhy of course! As soon as I can!โ€

โ€œTurn left at the next street, weโ€™ll go the longer way. This way has a better view of Forelore and leads us right to the stables.โ€ Ivy indicated the next fork in the road.

Before we left the South Road, I spied an ivory stone bridge arching over the silvery river. More black metal scrollwork intertwined with shining copper topped the spanโ€™s walls. The effect was stark yet still elegant and refined. Shrubs shorn into animal topiaries flanked the bridge end. One looked like it might be a fish of some sort, the other I couldnโ€™t tell.

Forelore sat directly opposite us, on the far shore, its pale gray walls topped with what had looked to be one color of green from afar, but was actually roofs of several shades of green that blended to create the same serene backdrop as a forest canopy. Off to the right, the red I saw earlier resolved into the shape of an immense flame on top of another building. I craned my neck back to keep looking as we moved off to the left.

*Image byย Clker-Free-Vector-Imagesย fromย Pixabay

โ€œIs that really a flame on that part of Forelore, off to the right?โ€ I asked.

โ€œYes, the main part of the Flamel wing is crowned with a flame. It looks like its burning in the sunlight because itโ€™s roofed with red crystal tiles. Itโ€™s one of the more extravagant aspects of Forelore. Trees make up parts of the Gaiist wing, but nothing like Rosewood Manor. The Aeros wing has more glass and crystal than stone. Each wing reflects the family it houses. Youโ€™ll see more when we get there. Weโ€™re on Rose Street at the moment, can you tell why?โ€

Looking around, I certainly could. Roses of every color in the rainbow adorned the fences along the road. To my dismay, there were even blue rosesโ€”a clear sky blue and a pale pastel blue that was almost white. One house had an arbor covered with grape-purple and snowy-white single-flower roses. And black. Densely petaled charcoal blooms dotted the vibrant palette. It was gaudy and breathtaking at the same time, not to mention fragrant.

*Image byย Free-Photosย fromย Pixabayย 

I stifled a sneeze and blurted โ€œBlue roses? You have blue roses?โ€

โ€œWhy, yes. Of course. Do you not?โ€

โ€œNo. We have blue flowers, but true blue is quite rare in Earth’s plant world. And no blue roses of any shade. Black also doesnโ€™t really exist. Most flowers labeled black are actually very deep purple. Iโ€™ll have to revisit this stretch laterโ€”.โ€

My words trailed off as we approached another bridge over the Irilliscint.

The roses on Rose Street were truly amazing. The residents decreed among themselves that the only flowers allowed along the fences are roses. There can be other plants in beds or pots behind them in the front yard, but only roses along the fences. The homeowners employ individuals with herbaceous plant talents to keep them blooming as long as possible into the winter; indeed, there is a Yule Rose contest. Which speaks more to the ability of the Elemental than the resident. Nevertheless, reputations are made and lost, and relationships forged in this time. I learned about that later on but thought it was appropriate to tell you about here. I would have loved to participate in such a contest, if I had magic, of course.

*erdur = hour; anar= day; anek = week; anos = month


Can you picture Rose Street? The picture I used above gives a good idea of the effect, but the roses were their own colors, which made it so much more brilliant. The blue, black, and purple shades captivated me, I couldn’t get over them. I strolled Rose Street whenever I could, it was always changing, and always lifted my spirits. Imagine what other wonders Irillo holds! Let me know some of your ideas below ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผ

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #27

Hello Everyone! I hope you are enjoying the last remaining days of summer, or perhaps you are urging fall on? I admit to being conflicted this year myself. Usually I am dragged kicking and screaming to summer’s end, refusing to put on socks and shoes and long pants until my feet are freezing and the days top out at 60ยฐF. But this year has been such an odd summer filled with soaring humidity and high heat, that I secretly (or not so anymore!) may be looking forward to fall. I feel like a blasphemer to my sun religion, but it just hasn’t been pleasant. Perhaps a move to the British Isles is in my future after all. ๐Ÿ˜†

Either way, enjoy the last of your season, wherever you may be, see you in September!

We left Elahna and Ivy in the last episode just as they were about to enter the capital city of Irillo. It was getting on in the evening, so they were making steady progress, but not taking it too quickly, for Elahna’s sake….~


Image by Babs Mรผller from Pixabay 

More of the same birches that housed the guard huts created an elegant allee over the South Road. Taverns, inns, hostels, and eateries resided under their airy canopies on the right side of the wide expanse, inviting travelers and locals in for refreshment, lodging, or trade. Lodgings Quarter catered to any and all tastes, apparently. Benches sat at various intervals for the weary. Posts and rails for hitching horses to became more ornate as we progressed into the city.

The Verdant Quarter, on the left side, showcased homes and shops, each one fronted by lush, manicured gardens. Some made use of large urns or containers of various materials to hold the colorful blooms and greenery, while others exhibited raised beds. But each property enclosed their display within a fence of some sort. It left an unending trail for the eye to follow.

*Image by congerdesign from Pixabay; Image by Matthias Bรถckel from Pixabay; Image by Petra Fuchs from Pixabay; Image by Catkin from Pixabay;  Image by ASSY from Pixabay  

Just before the arch, the road had become a cobbled thoroughfare in the myriad natural shades of river rock. Worn smooth and flat by traffic, not a weed grew in between the stones. The middle of the road was clearly reserved for horse and cart traffic, while those on foot stayed to the edges, a courtesy to all involved.

Image by Richard Revel from Pixabay 

Revelโ€™s ears had pricked upright in attention as we passed under the arch, and now they swiveled constantly. This, however, was the only sign of agitation I noticed. The rest of his demeanor was calm and confident. He seemed to take the strange noises, scents, and traffic in close quarters in stride, like heโ€™d done it before.

Every few houses, a child stood with a deep-sided pan that had a long handle and a finely toothed rake or broom. I puzzled about them to myself, until I saw one boy dart out after a mule cart passed and sweep up the dung the animal had dropped. Then he ran ahead to a three-sided stone bin about half the size of a cart, dumped his pan, and scampered back to his post. No wonder the streets were so clean.

Ivy caught me watching. โ€œYouโ€™ll see street tenders on all of the main roads. Itโ€™s a way to instill pride in the city and a sense of responsibility for our surroundings and creations. At the harvest fair on the equinox, one tender team is awarded the Bronze Broom for keeping their street or road the cleanest, as voted by the citizens. There is fierce competition between the youngsters, especially those chosen for posts on the North and South Roads.โ€

*Image by OpenClipart-Vectors from Pixabay 

I raised an eyebrow at her, somewhat in disbelief. โ€œReally?โ€ I asked.

โ€œYes. Each child is given a rake and a pan, but many actually make their own to try to keep their stretch of road as clean as possible. Oxen make a dreadful mess, as do drunkards. These children will be here just after dawn to clean up from the night before. It gets intense.โ€

โ€œYou speak as though from experience. You didnโ€™t have to do that, did you?โ€

โ€œI did! For dua summers, before my Choosing Day. Matris was did not want me excluded from things just because she sat on the Council and I lived in Forelore. Thatโ€™s why I still have so many friends here in Irillo. I donโ€™t regret una moment of it. And North Road won the Bronze Broom both those years.โ€ She smiled widely, two elegant dimples appearing on her cheeks. She appeared wholly pleased with herself.

I couldnโ€™t help but smile with her. I liked this land more and more each day.

Most of the buildings followed designs or styles I was familiar with; single or two story structures, sometimes three stories, of stone and wood. But here and there a slender, curved, or rounded one would sit between angular neighbors. These elven buildings were exotically beautiful, constructed of a flatly iridescent metal-like material that changed color depending on how you viewed it. With the sun setting off to the left, the shadowed sides appeared emerald green, while the sun-facing walls shone in coral and pink. Black iron woven in intricate patterns accented the windows, which were of any shape imaginable, and filled larger, blank wall spaces.

*Image by PublicDomainPictures from Pixabay 

They were a perfect mixture of elegance, beauty, and persistence.

โ€œBefore you ask, not much is known about the ancient elven architecture. Otherwise we would have replicated it for sure.โ€ Ivy said. โ€œThe material is a magically-enhanced mixture of crystal and aluminum, that much we know, but no one can decipher how to make it. The scholars think it was forged deep in the mountains using the underground vitae, though no methods or spells have ever been found that explain how to do it.โ€

โ€œAn entire city of that would be dazzling! How could our eyes stand it?โ€ I remarked.

โ€œWait until you see Forelore, then. Be prepared!โ€

Since it was fully evening, we saw many empty carts or those filled with empty crates and baskets heading out of the city.

*Image by Momentmal from Pixabay 

People waved and called out to one another and mothers held onto small children when they were on the road. Faces of every shape, size, and color laughed, smiled, and scowled. Hair colors and styles ranged widely, from bright rainbow or pastel colors to silver, smoke gray, black, and honey gold. I focused on ears for a bit, trying not to be too obvious, and found those to vary as well.

If Irillo was any indication, this was a highly mixed populace. I would stick out for my pure humanness.

The South Road cut a wide swath through the city as it ambled toward a bridge and what I assumed must be the palace Forelore ahead. I glimpsed roofs of deep hunter green and bits of fiery red beyond them. Color could not be overused, evidently. I felt like Iโ€™d stepped onto a giantโ€™s painterโ€™s palette.

Maybe I wasnโ€™t far off. There could be giants here, for all I knew.

*Image by OpenClipart-Vectors from Pixabay 

Yes, you are right, it was evening and the color was still that vibrant. I was eager at that point to explore the Verdant Quarter just to see all of the plants, and I thoroughly enjoyed it when I did. My ramblings in Irillo always seemed to bring me there. I do wish I had a better depiction of the elven architecture, but I don’t. I’ll do my best to put it into words though. ๐Ÿ˜Š We’ll leave it here for today, see you next time!~


The birch allee at the beginning of the South Road was stunning. Huphaean paper birches get very large in girth, unlike many we see. It was impressive and elegant, and set the stage for an entrance into an ancient city. What were some of your impressions of Irillo at first glance? Let me know in the comments below ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผโ—

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #26

Hello Everyone! You’ll never guess, but it’s raining again! A perfect morning to be putting together a story then, right? The amount of rain we have gotten lately has lessened, thankfully, so that our fields have become partially workable, and even planted some. Here’s hoping for a long New England fall.

So we are into August already, it’s amazing how fast time can go. And that’s when you’re here and not in a fantasy world like Elahna. My puppy Cedar turned one last weekend, but in truth, he hasn’t been a puppy for a while. He grew up quick. And yes, he is as cheeky as he appears here…

Cedar, on his birthday

But we should get back to the events underway with our two travelers, shall we?

In the last installment, Elahna and Ivy were on the approach to Irillo when a rather regal figure had appeared and all the surrounding animals had gone a bit nuts, Revel included. So we will pick it up there.~


I led Revel down to meet Ivy and remounted. An acrid tang of sour vinegar and ashes lingered like a fog in the air and Revel squealed again. That scent had to be what he reacted to.

Ivy grabbed his bridle to keep him from throwing me and trotted us away a bit. Felicity had returned to her calm demeanor.

โ€œWho was that?โ€ I asked, with more than a bit of exasperation. โ€œWhat is the smell thatโ€™s driving the animals nuts?โ€

โ€œThat was Kai Torchere, the Regnaโ€™s Best. He oversees the implementation and enforcement of many of her rulings and all of the patrols and defensive activities. Heโ€™s also patris of her sontris, Alder. He would have escorted us with the returning patrol to Forelore, but I declined. It would have passed by too quickly, you wouldnโ€™t have been able to take much in at that pace.โ€ She smiled slightly at me with the last sentence.

โ€œThank you for that. I agree, Iโ€™d rather go a bit slower to see it all unfold. Is that a tattoo on his forehead?โ€

โ€œYes. Well, not really. Kai is also a Dragon Rider. That is a drop of dragon blood given by the dragon to seal their bond. He must have just come from being with Ixojil, that was the odor you smelled. Ash and vinegar, thatโ€™s the scent of dragons. And it often drives other animals wild, especially if they arenโ€™t used to it.โ€

*Image by OpenClipart-Vectors from Pixabay 

โ€œThat explains a lot. But why did Felicity suddenly stop reacting? She was fighting you one erd*, the next she was still.โ€

โ€œLetโ€™s keep going while there is a gap in the traffic.โ€ Ivy said. We trotted back to the road and resumed our brisk pace in the space between groups, able to talk freely again. โ€œDragon Riders have mind magic. The dragonโ€™s blood confers it upon them. Thatโ€™s how dragons communicate, within the mind, not out loud with voices. Kai used his mind to ease Felicityโ€™s fear and banish it. She wonโ€™t react to dragon scent any longer. Which is a relief!โ€

โ€œWow, I see. Lucky for you!โ€

โ€œI know. Had you been with me, he would have done it for Revel, too. Youโ€™ll probably see Kai around Forelore. He resides in the Flamel wing when heโ€™s here. Heโ€™s difficult to miss with that bright copper hair.โ€

โ€œSo heโ€™s not a prince or something?โ€

She cocked her head at me. โ€œWhat does that mean? A prince?โ€

โ€œUm, it would mean the rulerโ€™s sontris, or a very high ranking male of the ruling family.โ€

โ€œOh, no. He is not. Though his position is very important. And his sontris is Halesiaโ€™s eldest child.โ€

โ€œHow old is the boy?โ€

โ€œAlder is seisla. You will see him around too, a lot. He is a busy boy, and wants to be part of everything. Halesia indulges him, even though he wonโ€™t inherit. She has a young dautris, Cyparis, so she will be next in line for the staff and scepter. But she is still in the nursery. You wonโ€™t mistake him, Alder has Kaiโ€™s bright hair.โ€ She sounded almost fond of the boy.

โ€œDoes he have magic yet?โ€

โ€œYes, though I think the consensus among the scholars is that he is a paterif. It wonโ€™t be for certain until his Choosing Day, though. He has a habit of setting things on fire and running for help to put them out. Forelore gets very cross with him.โ€

*Image by b0red from Pixabay 

โ€œWait, Forelore is the palace, right? It is alive like Rosewood?โ€

She chuckled heartily and raised her brows in amusement. โ€œRemember, I told you Forelore has a sense of humor? Donโ€™t, for an erdin, underestimate the dwelling. Forelore is the oldest place of power in Eflary, and one of two in Huphaea, the other being Erstwen, the palace in Rusmaar. Both are often called the โ€˜power behind the Regnasโ€™.โ€

โ€œYes, I do remember now. And I will try to behave.โ€ I grinned wickedly at Ivy. She laughed in return.

To be honest, I was really looking forward to “meeting”(?) the palace of Forelore, perhaps even more than the Regna or anyone else. It sounded like a perfect match to my own humor, and to see some of these things played out would be hilarious. Though getting randomly soaked in a hallway or locked in a closet wouldn’t be fun, it would be crazy to know it came from the building itself, and not an inhabitant. It could be like a permanent babysitter!

The road began to close in with buildings and fences enclosing small plots or yards. Children scurried in and out of the street, dogs bouncing alongside them and chickens scattering in their wake. The scents of turned earth and baking bread filled the air. My stomach responded, but I was far too absorbed to acknowledge it.

I saw the sign of an orderly, a bakery, a confectioner, and various others that I tried to puzzle out. As we rounded a slight bend in the road, gleaming silver-colored gates arched over the road in front of us. They shone with a coral glow from the sunset that painted the horizon over the Gathering Downs.

โ€œYou can remember which road you are on by the gates.โ€ Ivy said. โ€œThe South Road gates are platinum, the North Road are bronze. You will learn the bridges as well, they are all different and give you an indication of where you are in the city.โ€

โ€œThey look so delicate, yet up close, they certainly arenโ€™t. They must be old, though?โ€

โ€œThe gates are part of the original elven city. Once there were high walls to enclose it, but they fell long ago. Some of the current buildings on their paths may have bits of them in their walls.โ€

My head swiveled with my attempts to take all the details in. Guard huts on either side of the gate appeared to be grown out of elegant white-barked birches, their pointed triangular leaves fluttering lightly in the breeze. Flags of pale green featuring a tree with a brown trunk and autumn red canopy in one half, and a twining vine with a bright green stem, kelly green leaves, and amethyst flowers in the other half waved atop each hut. From the center of the arch, a pennant-shaped banner with tertia symbols on it of the same tree and vine, a mountain crowned in red, and a rearing chestnut horse on a deep green field hung still. I could see a short allee of large trees just beyond the gate.

I gazed up in wonder as we rode under the arch into the capital city of Irillo.

**anek = week, anar = day, anos = month, anid = year, erdur = hour, erd = second, erdin = minute, seisla = six

Irillo was so much more than I can tell in one episode. Yes, I did get to explore it, but I didn’t see it all, I had planned to when we returned after The Collection. It was quite an amazing place, startlingly beautiful and somewhat otherworldly. Forelore sat in the center like a much-loved lord surrounded by its adoring people. And that is not really far from the truth. The city and the whole country loved the moody building. You’ll get more about it next time, but first we have to get there, and that is a trip in itself. See you in two weeks. Elements be!~


Finally! They made it to Irillo. What kind of image do you have of the city so far? And what about the scent of dragons, it fits, right? What do you imagine dragons smelling like? Let me know in the comments below, I know there are loads of dragon lovers out there. ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‰

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #25

Hello Everyone! I’m writing to you today from my ark… We have been in the clutches of a rainy weather pattern for the past two weeks and it is beginning to take a toll. Our heavy clay soil holds water like a sponge, which makes farming very difficult in these conditions. Our corn is only half planted and it may be too late now to get the other half in the ground, if it ever dries out. ๐ŸŒง๐ŸŒง๐ŸŒง๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž

How is July treating you? Here’s one for youโ€” I saw Halloween candy in the grocery store this morning. ๐Ÿ˜ง Seriously? Perhaps it should just become a permanent display, Halloween candy is out more than it’s not! There’s so much that needs to happen between now and Halloween, does it have to be rushed? (Can you tell this is one of my pet peeves?) Anyway, let’s hand it over to Eleanorah and continue the tale, shall we?

We left off with Elahna having gotten a bit of a talking to by Ivy, but not in a negative way. Ivy was patient with her narrow Earth mindsets, but gave Elahna something to think about as an alternative. Venrood Forest is now behind them and they are closer to the capital city, Irillo, than not. Let’s pick it up there.~


We stopped briefly to water the horses at a stream that ran alongside a vast pasture that appeared empty.

Image by Albrecht Fietz from Pixabay 

On the other side of the road a similar expanse was dotted with round, brown cattle, their heads bent cropping the lush grasses.

Image by Steve Bidmead from Pixabay 

Half a mile further, we were brought to a halt by a large herd crossing the road. All grass-fattened steers to my experienced eye. Out of the blue, a cluster of the beasts broke ranks and surged toward us. Hooves and horns gouged the air in excitement.

โ€œOh, shit!โ€ I shouted, wondering if that was a word here. I had heard similar words said with vehemence, I should remember to ask about them.

Ivy shrieked as well, and I felt my legs clamp around Revelโ€™s sides in near-panic. He tossed his head and wheeled on his back hooves, enough to avoid the foremost steer, then skittered out of the road into the drainage ditch that ran alongside. I just managed to keep my seat on his back by seizing fistfuls of his mane when he reared and squeezing my legs to his shoulders.

Two red and white dogs streaked down the sides of the road, outpacing the cattle and setting up a boundary in front of them. Within minutes, the dogs had them turned around and trotting back to rejoin the rest of the herd.

Image by No-longer-here from Pixabay 

Revelโ€™s ears stopped twitching, as did his shoulder under my knee when I relaxed and settled back on the blanket-saddle. I smoothed his rumpled mane and patted his neck, praising his quick feet and him for staying relatively calm. I spotted Ivy up ahead on the opposite side of the road. A cocoa-skinned man on an equally brown horse faced her.

I trotted up to them as their conversation continued, with Ivy clearly annoyed. โ€œAh, they know somewhatโ€™s up. That one with the upturned horns has been on high alert since we grouped all the steers together a few aneks ago. I apologize again, Miss Ivy. You sure youโ€™re all right?โ€

โ€œYes, Iโ€™m quite fine, just a bit janked,โ€ She replied. The man winced slightly at her words. โ€œElahna, are you hurt? Where did you go!โ€

โ€œRevel managed to avoid the initial rush and got us into the ditch out of the way. I managed to not fall off. Weโ€™re both fine, though. I hate it when cattle do that. All it takes is one with an idea.โ€

โ€œAye, thatโ€™s the truth. Iโ€™ll bring more dogs with me for the drive tomorrow. Itโ€™s off to the finishing fields at my fratrisโ€™ for this lot. I wonโ€™t hold you lasses any longer. Again, my apologies, and Iโ€™m thankful youโ€™re all right. Safe travels.โ€ He nodded and raised his hand in farewell.

โ€œMy thanks, best of luck tomorrow to you. Elements be.โ€ Ivy spurred Felicity into a light canter to get us back on our way.

I was very thankful Revel was so nimble and that he reacted quickly. I’ve chased plenty of cattle and being in the path of many out on a tear is not advisable. Especially that lead steer the man mentioned, that one had something in mind…

When she slowed back to a trot about ten minutes later, an intersection was visible ahead. Traffic had picked up the last mile or so and now I could see why. The sounds of other travelers punctuated the air, voices, hooves, and the creaking of wooden wheels.

Photo by form PxHere

โ€œHere we are, the Fulcrum Road,โ€ Ivy said, throwing off her bristly air from the cattle encounter. โ€œAbout dua erdur*, and weโ€™ll be in Irillo. Youโ€™ll be able to see the city once we crest the rise over there.โ€ She pointed to the left, the direction most of the traffic was coming from.

Then she reached up and withdrew an amulet from under her tunic, letting it rest on her chest. It was a replica of the spreading tree emblem I had seen many places at Rosewood Manor. A third of the tree was brown without leaves and the other two thirds were vibrant green with tiny, real leaves. It was enclosed in a circle of forest green and hung on a leather cord.

Scion Arborea sigil

โ€œThat amulet is lovely. I hadnโ€™t noticed it before. But I saw that tree all over at Rosewood. That looks so real, though.โ€

โ€œItโ€™s a scion sigil. Each Seat member has one, we just donโ€™t always display them. And it is real. These are pieces of Rosewood Manor itself, bestowed upon me on my Choosing Day.โ€ She brushed the little leaves with her thumb in illustration. โ€œLetโ€™s go along, shall we?โ€

โ€œOf course.โ€

Though our pace slowed some out of courtesy to the others on the road, we reached the top of the gentle rise within half an erdur. I gasped aloud at my first sight of the capital city of Irillo.

It wasnโ€™t large like I am used to, but it was magnificent.

We were riding into the lowering sun, so the details fuzzed in my vision. Again I thought forlornly of my sunglasses. Glints of light sparkled off the spires Ivy mentioned and off the river in places. Two large complexes towered over the other buildings, one in the center and one further back and to the left. Domes and tall towers characterized these fixtures in a manner foreign to anything I knew or had seen yet in Huphaea. That must be the ancient elven architecture. It was stunning.

I didnโ€™t have much time to gawk at the city because of the number of carts and travelers on the road with us. We folded into the flow down the the back side of the rise, which was quite a bit steeper than the front. I kept glancing at Ivy, wanting to talk about what I was seeing, but the noise made conversation challenging.

Just then, the thunderous roll of many hooves moving fast, accompanied by startled shouts and shrieks filled the air. Revel snorted and tossed his head wildly, his eyes rolling and showing white in fear.

Oh no, I thought, here comes his test.

I focused my attention on him and guided him further toward the edge of the road, if only to get out of the way. Like you do for an emergency vehicle with its sirens on. Others were doing the same and a lot of the animals behind us appeared spooked or downright terrified. I slipped off Revel and grabbed his bridle, tugging him well away and into the thin border of trees that lined this stretch of road. I turned us to face out and saw Ivy heading through the throng trying to get to us. Felicity appeared rattled as well.

A party of seisla mounted men in forest green vests and black trousers with green trappings on their horses cantered up the rise. Occasionally one of them barked an oath for someone to move, but it wasnโ€™t cruel, just reinforcing. A copper-haired man rode at the front of the group, his bearing one of almost regality. His short cape was bisected with the same shade of green and burgundy.

He abruptly reined in, causing his striking silver bay horse to rear slightly and toss its head in annoyance. He nudged the horse in Ivyโ€™s direction and hailed her.

I couldnโ€™t hear the words exactly, but I did hear him address her by name. She had all she could do to hold onto Felicity, who was tossing her head and hop-skipping around Ivy in an attempt to pull her reins free. Something about him must be what frightens the horses so.

Then suddenly, Felicity fell quiet and stood placidly by Ivyโ€™s side.

They finished their conversation and I barely made out his farewell and โ€œIโ€™ll let Zelkova know you will arrive shortly.โ€ He trotted off, the riders following in his wake, but not before I glimpsed a blood red tear drop in the center of his forehead.

It had to be a tattoo, for the color was so vibrant it could only be ink of some sort. What an odd place for a tattoo. And an odd tattoo. It also must have really hurt.

He must be someone important, for the way his companions deferred to him. For that matter, the people on the road seemed in awe of him, too. A prince, maybe?

*anek = week, anar = day, anos = month, anid = year, erdur = hour, dua = two

I’ll leave it there for this time, bet I piqued your interest, huh? After being on the road alone, or relatively so, the increased traffic was different and I began to get a bit anxious. I was looking forward to exploring Irillo, though, even from this vantage point it was beautiful and interesting. Until next time, then, Elements be!~


Oooooh, a mysterious man! And why was he spooking the animals? We will find out next time. What do you think about the first glimpse of Irillo? Don’t worry, you will get plenty of description of the city when we get there, it’s truly one of my favorite places ever. Take your guesses about who the mystery man is or why he makes animals afraid below, I’d love to hear your ideas. ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผ๐Ÿค“

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #24

Hello Everyone! It has been a while, I know, since I’ve put out an episode. I’ve been hard at work on three short stories set in Huphaea, which have taught me how all-encompassing writing within word counts is! They were all meant to be contest entries, but honestly, only two made it to submission. The third way over shot the word count and because I was happy with it, I didn’t feel the need to cut it down. Undoubtedly, it will appear as a perk for newsletter subscribers or in an anthology of Huphaea stories at some point. I actually have a bunch thanks to my weekly writing group. But anyway, I’m back to the time of Ivy and Elahna (anid 1830) instead of four hundred (which would be quardeccund in Huphaea) anid or more in the past and looking forward to recounting their journey once more.

I hope all has been well with you in the post-vaccine world. It’s nice to go places without masks again and see life taking on more familiar shapes. Personally, I’m just thrilled that I can visit my library and browse the shelves enveloped by the scents of paper and ink! Here’s what happened when I made my first visit in person…

hahaha…oops.

Take care and enjoy the summer for those in the northern hemisphere.โ˜€๐Ÿ˜Ž๐ŸŠ๐Ÿผโ€โ™€๏ธ It’s good to be back!

In the last episode, way back in the spring, Elahna and Ivy were preparing to leave Cragbend and head on to Irillo. Ivy had just diagnosed the problems with the giant planetree and we had seen an air magician, or air weaver, as they are called. Ivy had given Lisssa her word that she would recommend Scosy for a stablehand at the palace in Irillo once she got there. Let’s get back to the story, shall we?~


Felicity and Revel pranced and quickstepped out onto the Shoe and toward the main road.

Image by Albrecht Fietz from Pixabay 

We passed a bakery with a sign the reverse colors of Sweetnicโ€™s back in Cragbend. Must be Rennayโ€™s kinsmanโ€™s shop, I thought.

Cragbend confectioners

I still had the peach tarts wrapped in the spelled paper that kept them warm in my rucksack so I didnโ€™t need to stop and replenish. Besides, there was bound to be confectioneries galore in Irillo, and we would be there that evening! Butterflies started rising in my stomach and I actually got a bit annoyed at myself. For a moment.

Why annoyed, you ask? Well, itโ€™s not as if I hadnโ€™t been in big cities before, Iโ€™d been to Boston, Dublin, San Francisco, even Moscow and Rome, and I knew Irillo wouldnโ€™t be on that scale. There was just so much emotion and anticipation roiling around inside me that I just couldnโ€™t deal with it. I donโ€™t like being overly emotional about anything, really. So I drew in a deep breath of cool, pine-and-spruce-drenched air and relaxed into my blanket-saddle to enjoy the day.

Before the hour (erdur) was out, the edge of Venrood Forest was in sight. Sunshine blanketed the green fields that spread out as far as I could see. Here and there, in strategic locations I surmised, clumps of trees formed windbreaks, and as we passed, hedgerows appeared as boundaries.

Image by Jordan Stimpson from Pixabay 

โ€œThe fields are much larger on this side of the forest.โ€ I mused aloud to Ivy, hoping to begin some conversation.

โ€œYes, well, they are within a dayโ€™s ride of Irillo, so production is important. Landholders a dayโ€™s ride out are the main suppliers of food for the city. Goods come down the Irilliscent too, but the surrounds are the largest source.โ€

โ€œThat makes sense. Is that a river, the Irilliscint?โ€

She nodded. โ€œIt runs through the middle of the city. We will cross the Irilliscint bridge just before entering Forelore. It flows in from the sea on the northwestern coast in the Foster lands, over an anekโ€™s ride away. Out here, these homesteads are grain farms and hay farms mostly. Closer in you will find the animal farms and vegetable suppliers. They are close enough to leave home in the early morning hours and make it in to sell at the market or unload and be back in an anar. A long anar, but a profitable one.โ€

Image by Broin from Pixabay 

I turned to look back at the looming wall of the forest. I missed the relative shade of the trees already, but I really missed my sunglasses. I started mentally cataloging my pack contents in search of something I could use to shade my eyes. Ivy, however, appeared unaffected, which didnโ€™t surprise me.

Revel seemed to be in his own zone, trotting easily in step with Felicity, so I loosened my grip on the reins and made to swing my rucksack off one arm and around to rummage through it. As the pack slid down toward my lap, its weight disrupted my balance so suddenly, I dropped to the ground on top of it. Revel shied, banging into Felicity and Ivy let out a startled yelp.

โ€œAre you all right? What happened?โ€

Thankfully, Revel kept his wits and didnโ€™t run, as my right foot was still caught up on his side in the stirrup. I twisted my ankle slightly and freed my foot. The stretch in my hip lessened and I sat up to make sure nothing else was injured. But all was well, just a bit of pride hurt.

โ€œI was trying to get something out of my bag without having to stop, but I guess I stopped anyway.โ€ Then I winced as I brushed off my shoulder. That would be colorful tomorrow, for sure.

Ivy snorted delicately. โ€œI donโ€™t mind stopping, just speak up if you need to.โ€

โ€œI know, ah, never mind. I just need something to shield my eyes. The sunlight is much brighter here than on Earth. Otherwise, Iโ€™ll have a headache in no time.โ€ I drew a shirt from yesterday out of my bag and wound it up on my head. It wasnโ€™t much, but it was something.

Image by Dimitris Vetsikas from Pixabay 

โ€œThe sun would give you a headache? Strange, it always makes my head feel lighter and more clear when I am out of the forest. Maybe your eyes just have to adjust. Try taking all of the light in, not squinting to keep some out. It may help you.โ€

โ€œIโ€™m quite sure they do have to adjust, but I will try that.โ€

I remounted and we lapsed into a conversation about the geography of Irillo. The city is divided into four quadrants-Scholars, Verdant, Lodgings, and Merchants, with the palace, called Forelore, at its center. The Irriliscint runs along one side of the High Seat. She didnโ€™t say it was for protection or anything like that, but my medieval-loving brain couldnโ€™t project anything less than a walled castle. Ivy had mentioned something about old elven architecture, I recalled. I wondered what that meant.

She looked pensive at my query. โ€œIโ€™m not quite sure how to answer that. It is very distinct, you will have no trouble picking it out, even from the rise on the road when we approach the city. Perhaps curved where you expect straight lines, domed tops many times, but seamless in construction. And old. Forelore is said to be one of the first buildings on Huphaean soil. Or a part of it, at least. Itโ€™s an immense complex. You will see soon enough.โ€ Her flawless face crinkled with knowing mischief. โ€œSo letโ€™s return to the subject of judgments about whom one spends time with in your world. Iโ€™m truly interested to know why it is of such concern.โ€

I rolled my eyes away from her and groaned to myself. Of course, she wouldnโ€™t forget. Here it comesโ€ฆ

The topic took us through the entire morning, noontime repast, and part of the afternoon. Much indignation and spluttering came from Ivy, but she continued asking questions and pointing out flaws in the norms of life on Earth. All I could do was nod, agree, or hold up my hands in unknowing.

Evidently, some of the prejudices and sentiments toward groups of people or races did exist elsewhere on Ereth, but not here in Huphaea. The Balance demands and provides for the acceptance of all who choose to live on the island continent, and it is a choice. Individuals are free to leave and not return, even those with Elemental blood and abilities, though any talents tend to wane outside of Huphaea. Vitae is present in other lands on the planet, but only in select places.

Outsiders could choose to settle in Huphaea as well, though it wasnโ€™t terribly common. But enough so that the diversity of physical characteristics was woven through the people, in addition to the influence of the vitae.

โ€œSome individualsโ€™ abilities are such that they influence their physical appearance. Members of the Lunad and Fairmoon scions have ink-black skin in deference to their power being night active. Many air weavers, like Leverett this morning, are tall and slender, coming as close to the air they command as possible. There are myriad ways the vitae manifests itself.โ€

โ€œNow that you mention it, I did notice that about him. But his presence still filled the space a larger person would occupy.โ€

โ€œExactly. Thatโ€™s common with air weavers. Air is all-encompassing.โ€

โ€œSo the underlying message is that life is to be lived. As best you see fit. How does that fit into maintaining the Balance?โ€

A long pause ensued before Ivy answered. โ€œIโ€™m genuinely not sure how to answer this, as Iโ€™ve never had to think about it. In your terms, you would say it is one of the social givens, maybe? Being concerned for what another individual does takes energy away from your own anar, from what you do to fulfill your own wants, needs, and desires and contribution to the community. That would mean you would always be out of balance, giving out more energy than is necessary, perhaps more than you have.”

Image by Gordon Johnson from Pixabay 

“There is no room on a balanced scale of the whole and the self for another pan.โ€ She turned to regard me, genuine confusion reflected in a few tiny creases between her eyebrows and the set of her mouth.

โ€œI can work with that. Itโ€™s a good starting place if I do end up having to stay here.โ€

We rode in silence for a while then. I certainly had much to think about. Perhaps the Earthly mindsets would just fall away after a while, like โ€˜If you donโ€™t use it, you lose it.โ€™

What was that? Oh, no, I didnโ€™t regret taking those fellows up on their offer. (Recall the proposition at the foot of the stairs at the inn in Cragbend of episode #23) I just wasnโ€™t surprised when such questions were asked the next time, lol.

*anek = week, anar = day, anos = month, anid = year


So far Huphaean society seems to be more simplistic than ours, but is it really? There was still a lot always going on, but their motivations and principles were very different. How about the idea of energy balancing per individual, could you do such a thing? Let me know below ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿผ

I think I could. It makes so much sense. It would only work if the majority of people did, though. That’s why it did work in Huphaea. Everyone did there. See you next time!~

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Happy Earth Day!

Huphaeans would honor Pater Below today by burning brown candles, as they do every third-quarter phase of Soror Moon.

How will you honor Pater Below today?

Insecure Writers Support Group April Post

The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writerโ€™s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer โ€“ aim for a dozen new people each time โ€“ and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

Letโ€™s rock the neurotic writing world!

Our Twitter handle is @TheIWSG and hashtag is #IWSG.

April’s question is: Are you a risk-taker when writing? Do you try something radically different in style/POV/etc. or add controversial topics to your work?


*Image by mohamed Hassan from Pixabay

When I first glanced at the prompt I thought โ€œNo, Iโ€™m not a risk-taker in my writing.โ€

But then while pondering it further, perhaps I am somewhat. I don’t think of it as risk-taking, more like trying to make myself stand out in the sea of fantasy writers and bloggers. Building an audience is all about standing out and getting noticed, as is all the marketing I do for my freelance editing business. And is standing out risky?

It sure can be.

Well, it is to me, as Iโ€™m sure it is to many followers of this group (the word โ€˜insecureโ€™ is what draws us together, right?). But it is also something I MUST do if I want to be a successful business owner and author.

Like many fantasy authors and game players, I have created a fantasy world where my stories will take place.

I say โ€˜willโ€™ because they arenโ€™t written yet. There. I said it. Iโ€™m going to write stories.

Even saying this feels risky to me. Iโ€™ve just put it in writing that Iโ€™m going to write novels. What if I never get to?

Honestly though, I have enough of the story on paper that there is no way I canโ€™t write the books now. Iโ€™m dying to.

On to risk number 2. The blog series is written in the first person, from the perspective of the narrator who is doing the traveling, but she is telling the story to an audience (the readers) actively. Throughout the narration she โ€˜breaks the fourth wallโ€™ and talks to the audience, giving them candid info about the scene or episode or answering questions they pose to her (the questions are implied in the answers).

Itโ€™s not a typical construction, but I need it to be more than boring blog posts talking about a fantasy land. It needs a purpose, a reason, and to be more conversational. Whatโ€™s more conversational than someone discussing their travels to a foreign land and answering questions about it? It works well enough for me writing it, I can only hope it works for the reader.

Risk number 3. I suppose some of the idiosyncrasies within my fantasy world could be considered risky. For example, it is a matriarchal society. Heredity is through the female line for rulers, family lineages, and names, and the offspring remain with the motherโ€™s family until they are at least 9. Marriage exists, but it rarely happens. There is no reason for two people to be only together.

There is no worship system, no houses of worship, no gods. Only what the people interact with on a daily basis- sky, earth, sun, moon.

I have a difficult time terming these points as โ€˜riskyโ€™ because it is fiction, and fantasy at that. There is the real risk that some readers wonโ€™t identify with it enough to read it, which is ok. Thatโ€™s what target audiences are for.

Risk inherently implies that there is a reward. I am rewarded when I write the story and see it come to life on the page, and I can be rewarded if readers consume it and enjoy it also. Growth and change come about through risk. Without it, it can be difficult to move forward in life, business, career, in many things. Maybe my risks arenโ€™t earthshattering, but for me, they still seem large. And Iโ€™ll keep taking them.

The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #23

Hello Everyone! Daylight savings time has ended in my corner of the world, and that means evenings are useful once again! Ostara is around the corner, too, marking equal day and night length. The energy of the season is rather frenzied, my animals are ecstatic to be spending more time outside without ice.

In other news, I’ve been working on a couple of short stories for contests and an anthology. They are both set in Ereth, I’ll keep you updated on how they do and where you may be able to find them in the future.๐Ÿ˜‰

The next issue of Collataโšก comes out this weekend, so if you want to see what being a Nightingale is all about, join us with the link that follows the episode. Hope to see you there!~

Elahna and Ivy had just made their way upstairs to their rooms at the end of the last episode. That is, after a healing soak in the hot pool and an unexpected proposition. Elahna was surprised and sheepish, Ivy rather unimpressed. What will the morning bring? Let’s find out!~


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I woke the next morning to the sounds of creaking and then a splash, which made me sit bolt upright. My head outpaced my body some in the movement and I clasped it to slow the bobbing images, then fell back against the pillow. I hadnโ€™t had cider in some time, apparently Lissaโ€™s batch had more of an effect than I had thought it would. But at least the splash hadnโ€™t been directed at me. I sat up, slower this time, and peered out the open window.

Below, Scosy was drawing water from the stone well, transferring it into a large wooden cask that sat on a low cart.

*Image byย PublicDomainPicturesย fromย Pixabay

The air was heavier than the evening before with the distinct earthy tang of evergreen forest. Tendrils of ground fog threaded through the tree trunks beyond the innโ€™s grounds. I fumbled in my discarded clothes for Aymurโ€™s timepiece. It showed being in the fifth erdur. Well, at least I hadnโ€™t overslept.

I watched as Scosy finished his task, hung the well bucket on a hook next to the winch handle and set off toward the stables with his bounty. It was good to know the horses would be well-tended before we left. Time then to see about myself.

After a meager breakfast of two glorious slices of toasted homemade bread with butter and some dark fruity jelly, I made a visit to the stables to check on the horses. Scosy hurried in when he saw me enter, a stricken look on his face.

โ€œI wasnโ€™t sure when ye would be settinโ€™ out, miss, โ€˜pologies for not havinโ€™ โ€˜em ready.โ€ He grabbed for Revelโ€™s stall door, but I held up my hand to stay him.

โ€œMorning Scosy, no need to scramble. Ivy has to look at the center tree, we will be a bit yet. I trust heโ€™s been good for you? No trouble?โ€ I nodded at Revel, who munched contentedly on some extremely fragrant hay.

โ€œOh no, miss, heโ€™s been a peach. No trouble at all.โ€ His words trailed off as he shifted to look around me at something outside.

*Image byย ใ“ใ†ใ“ใ† ใใกใงใ‚“ย fromย Pixabayย 

I turned to see Ivy striding across the yard toward the road and the center tree, I assumed. Scosy didnโ€™t even seem aware of my presence any longer, so I stepped back out of his way. I recalled Lissaโ€™s comment last night about the boyโ€™s infatuation and felt a pang of sadness for him.

I trailed after Scosy, who lagged well behind Ivy as she strode toward the center tree. It was a magnificent specimen of a planetree. The camouflage colors of olive, gray, cream, white, and sage green cloaked the massive trunk in ribbons of brightness amid the morning shadows. Lissa hurried out the front of the tavern, joining Ivy, who gazed up at the canopy.

*Image byย JamesDeMersย fromย Pixabayย 

A stoutish man in a busy red, black, and green plaid shirt and caramel-colored trousers approached at a determined pace from the upper right of the Shoe. His sleeves were rolled to the elbows and the open buttons of his shirt allowed a forest of dark hair sprinkled with wood shavings to precede him by two inches at least. I had to stifle a giggle behind my hand. The man must be furred like a bear under the shirt, I thought to myself, but then quashed the idea, because what if there were bear-men here? Bigger curls of wood and more shavings clung to the canvas panels tacked onto his trousers above the knees. He must be a finish carver or something, definitely one who works wood with tools, not saw blades.

He nodded a brusque greeting at Lissa and the few other townsfolk who had gathered, setting the unruly nest of wavy hair on his head bobbing. โ€œElements be, Miss Ivy, well met. Lissa said youโ€™d be out to have a look at our tree afore you set out. Iโ€™m much obliged.โ€ He brushed wood dust off his hand after raising it in greeting.

โ€œElements be, Porter. Has there been something ailing the tree recently? It definitely appears less vigorous than I would expect.โ€

โ€œWe dealt with a bout of anthracnose last anid, but by autumn, it was looking well again.โ€

โ€œThis tree has a dryad, am I correct?โ€ Heads nodded.

โ€œBut no oneโ€™s seen her for a while. The lads have been out in the forest blocks, I just havenโ€™t had a chance to ask them to speak with her.โ€

Ivy nodded once in understanding. โ€œIโ€™ll try to get her to come out so I can ask her what she knows.โ€

I stepped closer to the gathering, but still on the outside edge, and watched Ivy place her palm against the trunk. After a moment, she stepped back, her gaze following something I couldnโ€™t see. Then she gasped and held both her hands out as if to catch a baby bird.

I glanced around at the others in the group, whose faces all had tightened with concern. But they looked at Ivy and not her hands, so I surmised they couldnโ€™t see the dryad either.

Ivy cocked her head slightly and said softly, more for her audienceโ€™s benefit than the dryadโ€™s I wagered, โ€œShow me, what ails you and your tree?โ€ Her lips firmed into a line as she studied her hands, then she looked upwards into the canopy. โ€œIs there an air weaver in town that can float me up?โ€ She fixed Porter with eyes that brimmed with urgency. โ€œShe is very weak, but she shows me tunnels and chewing. There must be borers somewhere. I need to go up and look.โ€

โ€œAh, yes,โ€ Porter pivoted to face Scosy. โ€œLad, run and find the Verticx chap. They may not have left for the blocks yet. Hurry!โ€ Scosy jolted into movement, his gangly limbs propelling him down a side lane into the forest. โ€œIs she in any danger?โ€ Porter continued, โ€œCan we do anything?โ€

โ€œDo you have an Orderly? Some ginseng would help her vitality. We may need to make poultices to draw the borers out as well.โ€

*Image byย whaltns17ย fromย Pixabayย 

A woman in a sky blue and pale yellow plaid scurried off up the left leg of the Shoe. Ivy remained focused on her cupped hands, her brow creased with worry.

I admit, it was strange watching Ivy attend to something I couldnโ€™t see. And honestly, it made me feel a bit better knowing the others couldnโ€™t see the dryad either. I knew that Lissa had some wood magic though, and I assumed Porter did as well, so there must be a threshold of ability that allowed someone to see the dryads. I did wish to see what one looked like.

No, at that point I wasnโ€™t sure what the nature of the dryad-tree bond was, but I did ask Ivy later when we were underway. Dryads live in and on their trees, and they take on some aspects of them as their appearance. She said this dryad had skin that mirrored the treeโ€™s, but that it was brittle and flaky and had become a slate gray instead of multi-colored. The creatureโ€™s hair was dry and crumbly and she felt slack like a wilted stem. I could tell she was very concerned for the dryad, but honestly felt that the ginseng root the woman returned with would help her immensely.

Scosy returned in half an hour or so with a silver-haired man who had very long pointed ears, the most elf-like ears I had seen yet. He was fairly tall, and very slight, but somehow managed to take up space within the gathered crowd. Ivy greeted him and told him what she needed. He smiled, nodding in agreement, and made a circular motion with his hand, the palm facing downward. A sharp breeze sprang up and the loose dirt and pebbles in front of him began to spiral around. Next thing I saw was Ivy step up into air, but obviously onto something. The elf joined her, and they rose straight up toward the branches, some sixty feet above. I bit my tongue to keep from drawing attention to myself.

They spent about ten minutes aloft, circling the trunk and examining three areas closely. Ivy confirmed the presence of borers and a secondary infestation of lacebug when she landed. She said the trunk was weeping in the three places she and Leverett had lingered at and prescribed poultices of tobacco leaves to be applied every few days, making sure the mash filled the tunnels.

โ€œLeave a piece of ginseng root out for the dryad every tertia or quarta anar* for the next anos too. Whoever goes up with Leverett can also spray the lacebug with a soap solution. Just to lessen the pressure on the tree so it can heal. Send word to Aymur for him to visit in seisla aneks and check progress. Iโ€™ll recheck it on my return from Irillo as well. Hopefully I can perform some bark healing on the wound sites then.โ€

โ€œMany thanks, Ivy. We will see it all gets done. Safe travels to Irillo, and give Sawyersetโ€™s regards to the Regna. Elements be.โ€ Porter ambled away back up the road, wood shavings littering his wake.

We returned to the tavern with Lissa to gather our belongings and say our farewells. She stood, shaking her head with a wry grin on her face, watching her son bustle about our mounts in the stable yard when we alighted from the back stairway. โ€œAh Ivy, youโ€™ve saddled me with a mournful puppy for the rest of thโ€™ anar. Look at him, his feet โ€˜ave barely touched the ground since you told him to make ready. You sure you donโ€™t want โ€˜im to tag along, youโ€™d only have to say the word.โ€ I heard the mirth, but also the concern in her remark.

Ivy started to reply but Lissa cut her off with a waved hand, โ€œI do jest with ye. Heโ€™ll be โ€˜imself again on the morrow. I do wish he had more of my wood skills, but evidently not so. Sawyerset isnโ€™t the place for โ€˜im. The horses is what he gravitates toward, Iโ€™ll have to put out a word for him. Maybe some bigger inn could use a stable hand and he could work his way up. Quindecca isnโ€™t too young to be settinโ€™ himself up for later on.โ€

โ€œI could ask when Iโ€™m in Irillo. Perhaps even inquire in Foreloreโ€™s stables. I can vouch for him, so that is more than a blind query.โ€

โ€œWould ye do that? Iโ€™d be much obliged to you. And I wonโ€™t breathe a word to Scosy unless thereโ€™s something for him.โ€

โ€œOf course, Iโ€™ll report back on my return, or send a message if there is something before. Do you think heโ€™d be willing to go at any point?โ€

โ€˜Oh, Iโ€™m sure he would. If he could work in a busy stable, my boy would be right at home. Almost as happy as seeinโ€™ you.โ€ We all shared a laugh and a smile, said our thanks, and parted ways at the kitchen door.

Let’s leave off here for today. In case you are wondering, Ivy did indeed find a place for Scosy, in Forelore’s stables no less. They were happy to have another hand with horse ability on staff. I saw him at one point out in Irillo as part of a foal training unit. He seemed very content and at home. Lucky boy, but I’m sure Lissa missed him. And it was good to know Ivy was true to her word.

*anek = week, anar = day, anos = month, anid = year


I’m sure there are many arborists out there who would love to have levitating abilities to diagnose tree canopy issues. I was impressed with that, for sure. It was also interesting that we have the same problems with planetrees and sycamores here that the Center Tree suffered from. But no dryads. Poor Scosy, though, I thought about saying something, but I didn’t want to get involved. Would you have said anything? Have you been in a similar situation and not done anything? Drop a comment below about your experience or let me know how your spring is going ๐Ÿ˜€. See you next time!~

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #22

Hello Everyone! Are the signs of season change cropping up around you? We are in a bouncy weather pattern of random days below freezing in between seasonable days in the 40’s. It’s annoying for wardrobe choices, I’ll admit, but it is keeping mud season somewhat at bay. For now. March is certainly my least favorite month of the year.

The signs of spring are burgeoning, though, birds are singing, maple sap is running, and my turkeys are getting restless ๐Ÿฆƒ. And we change the clocks soon! That is certainly a highlight of spring! Let’s head back to Huphaea now, where it is already warm and sunny, shall we?

When we last left Ivy and Elahna, they had just finished having a pitcher of cider with Lissa, the tavern-keeper, and were heading off to the bathhouse. Sounds perfect, doesn’t it?~


*Image by MeHe from Pixabay 

During the bustle of the evening downstairs a few other boarders had claimed rooms upstairs. Partially open doors allowed the sounds of luggage being wrangled and tired travelers to accompany us down the hallway. Ivy un-barked our doors and I shucked off my sandals, happy to be out of their dusty, gritty soles. I fished around in my sack for a few clean items to don after the soak and we headed back out to the bathhouse.

The water was crisp and clean and blissfully warm. I sunk into it, knowing it would be difficult staying awake with the gentle sounds and rhythms of the bubbling water.

โ€œDo you know many people here in Sawyerset?โ€ I asked.

โ€œSome, but certainly not all. Itโ€™s difficult not to know some, what with our towns being joined by the Saywerโ€™s Run, the mills, and that we all manage the forest together. Many of us at Rosewood have talents that are particularly beneficial to forestry, so we monitor the health of Venrood Forest and help as needed.โ€

โ€œMakes sense. So how many actually live at Rosewood? I saw maybe twent- er, quinduary people while I was there, are there more?โ€

โ€œOh yes. Iโ€™m not even sure how many are part of the Scion, really. Many of us are scattered throughout the land using our talents where they are needed. So, for example, there are several other forest tracts in Huphaea which all need managing for production and in general. Those Arboreans that are drawn to those locales may only venture to Rosewood every few years, but they still belong to it and the Scion. They are still part of us.โ€

โ€œI see. What is your talent, Ivy, if I may ask? I donโ€™t mean to be rude, if it is rude to ask about that. I am a horticulturist at home, so plants and trees are my thing. And you did grow that bark out of the doorโ€ฆโ€

โ€œI have bark-related abilities. I can enhance bark growth on the southern side of trees for winter protection, sense insect infestations, heal bark wounds, actions like that. I can work with deciduous and evergreen trees, but I have more success with the deciduous.โ€

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โ€œHence why Lissa mentioned the planetree to you?โ€

โ€œYou know the center tree is a planetree?โ€ Ivy smiled at me, and I sensed that I just scored a point or two with her.

โ€œYes, absolutely. Iโ€™ve recognized most of the species weโ€™ve seen. And if not directly, then they fit into an oak family, or a willow family, or something I know. Itโ€™s pretty cool, actually.โ€

โ€œIt must be because our worlds are so closely tied that they can support the same forms of life. That would be something to ask the Scholars about.โ€

โ€œI have to say, though, that everything I see and know here is so much more vigorous than on Earth. That has to be due to the vitae and your magics. Are all individual magics that specific?โ€

โ€œMany are, yes. Itโ€™s what makes each of us unique. I also have the ability to work with color some, as my patris is an Arister. An illustrator, to be exact. So I can match the hue of something to another thing. It is very helpful with wound healing. I can make it look like the tree wasnโ€™t ever injured.โ€ She sat up a bit straighter as she said this, and I surmised that she was quite proud of this bit. To illustrate the point, she gazed at the sky blue bath sheet on the table and taking a lock of her hair in two fingers, turned it the same bright color. That explained the matching braids and leggings I noticed earlier.

โ€œThat is amazing!โ€ I said. โ€œIโ€™m sure the sawyers appreciate that ability, as well as the trees.โ€

โ€œYes. They do. Both of them. And some of the wood Aristers as well. It makes me feel useful.โ€

I began to notice some of the riding muscles in my legs heating, almost like I had applied linament to them, and then they tingled almost like they were going to sleep. I fidgeted with the new sensation and noticed Ivy doing the same. โ€œIs there something in the water? My legs are all tingly.โ€ I asked.

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โ€œHealing stones.โ€ She replied. โ€œAfter contact with them for some time, they correct imbalances in energy.โ€

โ€œSeriously? Well, isnโ€™t that handy. Which ones are they?โ€ I started hunting for something that would mark the healing stones as different, but couldnโ€™t see anything.

โ€œNo idea. Only those with healing abilities can tell. You could be standing on a mountain of healing rocks and be none the wiser.โ€

โ€œWow, that could be good or bad, right? Either way, its pretty excellent right now.โ€

With sore muscles eased, we climbed out of the pool, dried off, and dressed again for the short walk back upstairs. Outside, leaning against the back wall of the tavern, three of the fellows we met through Lissa were sipping pints and trading jokes, by the sound of their laughter. Ivy shot me a quizzical look, one brow raised, and smiled in recognition. One of them stepped over to open the door, it appeared, but he delayed the motion enough that we had to pause ourselves.

โ€œIt was lovely to make your acquaintances earlier, ladies, will you be returning to the tavern for a nightcap now? Allow us to accompany you, the taproom is a fair bit more crowded than before.โ€

I instantly got a bit uncomfortable, a surge of butterflies rising in my stomach. The buzz of noise from the taproom spilled out the partially open door, and the sharp clink of glasses as the barboy washed them in the giant tub inside indicated the state of the evening. The speaker was still holding the door, smiling.

โ€œI appreciate the offer, but it has been a long travel day. Iโ€™m set to retire for the night, with another day on horseback ahead. Glad to have made your acquaintance earlier, as well, and enjoy your evening.โ€ I noticed there was no hint of speaking for both of us in Ivyโ€™s words and her pointed look conveyed that I was expected to answer for myself.

โ€œOh, no, thank you. I couldnโ€™t hold another drink. Iโ€™m ready for some sleep, morning will be here soon. It was nice to meet you.โ€

โ€œSurely there is still time left to be enjoyed before the sun rises.โ€ The speaker, (I couldnโ€™t remember his name), said, a mischievous wink added to his smile.

โ€œI, um, Iโ€™m sorry. I really am tired. Thank you for the offer, though.โ€ I straightened and looked over his shoulder at the door, ready to brush past him if he stood firm.

He didnโ€™t, and gave way for us to pass. โ€œIf you find sleep eludes you, the offer stands, and my friend here has room dua down the hall from you. Safe travels, Elements be.โ€ The last was uttered at the bottom of a low, sweeping bow that could have been mocking were I at home, but here it felt genuine and even hopeful?

โ€œElements be. Gโ€™dag,โ€ we replied and stepped through the door, pulling it closed once again. The barboy gave us a slight grin as we headed up the stairs. He had heard the whole exchange, I was sure.

โ€œYou could have accepted their offer, if you wished,โ€ Ivy whispered. โ€œIf I werenโ€™t truly exhausted, I probably would have. Iโ€™m sure it would be a lovely night.โ€

โ€œAh, what? Seriously? No, Iโ€™m good. Was that what it sounded like? Did they want me, or us, to visit that room?โ€

โ€œOh certainly. Did you not consider it? Why would you not, if you were of a mind?โ€ She honestly looked puzzled that I was surprised at such a bold proposition.

โ€œWell, I guess I just wasnโ€™t expecting that, being a stranger here.โ€

โ€œWhat does that matter? Donโ€™t you express desires and wish them to be fulfilled?โ€ We were outside my door now, my hand on the knob.

โ€œSure, but what would be said afterwards? I mean, wouldnโ€™t there be social consequences of acting on those desires? There would be where I come from, if word got out to people I knew.โ€

Ivy stared at me blankly, the silence stretching into awkwardness. Heavy footsteps fell on the stairs at the other end of the hall and she broke the stare.

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โ€œYou will have to explain the โ€˜social consequencesโ€™ of sharing the pleasure of anotherโ€™s company and bed to me tomorrow. I am afraid my mind is too tired to make sense of it now. Shall we meet at siesla downstairs?โ€

โ€œYes, sounds good. Gโ€™dag.โ€ I turned away feeling scolded, hearing her muttered โ€œGโ€™dagโ€ in return.

The bed was soft, and the breeze wafting in the open window stirred the air in the room pleasantly. I was asleep moments after hitting the pillow, despite the crowd noise from below. My last thoughts were of how socially inept I must be for this land. And the dressing down I was likely to get in the morning.

Ivy did end up giving me a good talking to as we rode, and I learned some of the principles of Huphaean society in general. Namely that there was nothing wrong with enjoying the company of anyone you wished to, were they willing. That was the main tenet, however, willingness. Refusal was an absolute and never questioned. She honestly did not understand the concept of judging someone for what they did or who they shared themselves with. Huphaeans believed in enjoying all life had to offer, as much as possible. I had a lot of adapting to doโ€ฆ


In case you are wondering, yes, I did manage to make a bollox of almost every social situation for quite a while… But what’s new, right? Would you have accepted the offer? One thing I was reminded of multiple times is how long it can take to shed prior beliefs and adopt those of the culture you are in. Have you ever experienced that firsthand? Share your cultural adjustments in the comments below, I’d love to hear them.

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Insecure Writers Support Group March Post

The first Wednesday of every month is officiallyย Insecure Writerโ€™s Support Groupย day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talkย about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

Letโ€™s rock the neurotic writing world!
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March 3 question – Everyone has a favorite genre or genres to write. But what about your reading preferences? Do you read widely or only within the genre(s) you create stories for? What motivates your reading choice?


Up until a few years ago my reading preference was single-minded: Fantasy.

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I hadn’t even thought seriously about writing a book, so that wasn’t part of the equation. When I went to find reading material, I went straight to the fantasy section and that was it.

Then came the day that I was browsing in my local library and I saw Deborah Harkness’s A Discovery of Witches. The cover drew my attention, the blurb reeled me in and I took it with me. A crack appeared in my fantasy-hardened reading focus.

Now with all of the publicity surrounding the tv show based upon that book, you probably know something about it. Maybe only that there is magic in it, so there is a fantastical element presentโ€”I didn’t really stray that far.

But that was just the beginning. I blew through the All Souls series, fell completely in love with it, and had the worst book hangover ever after I was done.

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I wanted more. I wanted more alternate history stories. I wanted to see where authors’ imaginations take them when historical events are the prompts.

That was the beginning of my obsession with historical fiction set in Europe.

If I look at it critically, it really shouldn’t have surprised me as it did. I have always gravitated toward European history prior to 1900, those are the elective classes I took and what I enjoyed learning about at any point in school. I even took history classes when I studied in Ireland for a year.

Even this time period restriction has eased, though. My current audiobook binges are all set in England and Europe around both World Wars.

Next came my offer to read a novel as a beta reader for a friend in a Facebook group.

Splash. I fell into steampunk.

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Wow, is that a fun genre! I binged that for months, filling my Kindle with its brassy, mechanical tales swathed in multi-layered skirts, clockworks, and evening suits. It has become my go-to for a fun, adventurous, mechanically magical page-turner.

With fantasy being my first and steadfast love, that is what I want to write first. I’m well on my way to doing that, publishing a blog series with the worldbuilding for my created world while I work on sorting through the elements of the main story that stumbles around in my brain.

But every so often, the idea of delving into a historical fiction story or a some-kind-of-punk mystery raises its hand and my writer-brain wants to take a ditch-dive into the ‘shiny new thing.’ One day, yes, I will do it. But first things first.

I also honor my true love of books and bookstores, gravitating toward titles about libraries, bookshops, scrolls, and the like, which has led me to some contemporary fiction. Then there’s paranormal (give me a vampire any day, go ahead, bite me, please!) and the many, many YA and NA (new adult) books I’ve enjoyed.

I guess I do ready sort of widely. Somewhat. I’ve tried murder mysteries, thrillers, cozy mysteries, and women’s fiction, too. It’s all been fun.

Since I’ve branched out, I’ve realized that I do have moments when I want something specific, a certain tone or type of story, and I can usually find it in my TBR list (which is endless).

Covers do draw me in, as a first contact point, or repel me. In fact, I find that the current trend of putting close-up images of people on the covers does nothing for me. It’s fine if there is a character depicted, but what else is there? Symbols, landscapes, buildings, books, what else is there to draw my attention and make me pick up the book to read the blurb? That’s what piques my curiosity and what I want to see in my mind when I read.

I know expanding my reading genres has expanded my ability as a writer and storycrafter. It has to. It’s part of the alchemy that happens in the brain when it is exposed to story. It takes all the bits of inspiration and craft and scrambles it up together to put out my unique author voice.

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We are all influenced by what we read. It is important to acknowledge and accept that, even embrace it because that’s how writers learn and develop. Nonfiction that teaches writing craft is excellent, but reading identifies all of those principles in action and helps to inspire our minds to weave them into our own tales.

So yes, read. Read your own genre profusely. But try not to ignore others. You never know which phrase from a horror thriller will be the spark for the reaction that creates your plot twist.

Reading expands our minds and imaginations, fills the creative well. Reading creates inspired writers.~


If you are curious about my fantasy writing, please check out my Collection of Huphaea blog series here on this site!