The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #21

Hello Everyone! Hope you are all keeping well with the difficult weather parts of the US are experiencing right now. The Northeast is used to the snow and freezing temps each winter, I can only imagine how difficult it is to deal with when the infrastructure isn’t designed to handle it. Feel free to send it back this way, where it belongs, we could use some more in my opinion ๐Ÿค”. February is moving along and we are approaching the year anniversary of lockdown here. It’s actually an odd feeling, to think that it’s only been a yearโ€”it feels like ten. Before we know it, the trees will be budding and the Easter bunny will be hopping around, though he already appears to have visited the stores… The Easter candy was out three weeks before Valentine’s Day! But anyway, we should get back to the story after my unplanned hiatus. Stay strong and healthy, spring is on the way!~

We last left the ladies, Ivy and Elahna, in Sawyerset at The Tarnished Blade Inn. The innkeeper had just instructed them to not dawdle in returning to the dining room, as it was filling up quickly. Shall we rejoin them?~


Returning to our setting

I must have stood gazing a second or two too long, as Ivy touched me on the shoulder. โ€œCome on, you heard Lissa, weโ€™d better be quick or weโ€™ll be standing.โ€

A few heads turned and watched us ascend the stairs, but not in an overly concerned manner. The second floor was a warren of rooms extending off the main hallway that wound the length of the building, much like the random table arrangement in the room below. Though the room placement seemed haphazard though, I decided it was actually carefully planned to maximize space and the number of rooms. โ€œThe corner room is my usual, yours is right here. This stair goes to behind the bar and out to the wash building, thatโ€™s why Lissa always holds it for me.โ€ Ivy put a hand on her doorknob, โ€œMeet you back in an erd?โ€

โ€œYeah, sure.โ€ I pushed open my door and stepped into a tidy, yet welcoming space just big enough to be called a room. It held a single bed, a low dresser, a chair, and a small round table arranged around a long, oval, emerald green rug. The curtains matched the hue of the rug. I slung my bag onto the bed and looked out the window over the back of the tavern. A blocky structure jutted out from the main building, which must be the kitchen that Lissa disappeared into, and a smaller, thatch-roofed building stood further back but directly behind our rooms. A thin trail of smoke rose from a central chimney and people entered or exited from either end. The wash house? I surmised I was about to find out.

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I turned to head back out to meet Ivy, just as she stepped in. โ€œOh, this is so cute, will it suit you?โ€ I nodded. โ€œGood, grab that linen and letโ€™s go wash up quick. I donโ€™t know about you, but I feel quite dusty.โ€ She held a ruby red towel and a round of light pink soap. I did suddenly feel quite gritty, though I hadnโ€™t noticed much dust on the ride.

After I pulled the door closed, Ivy reached out and drew a finger across the door frame and the jamb in three places, sealing the door closed with strips of gnarly wood. I gave her what I hoped was a questioning look and she shrugged as she turned. โ€œNot that I donโ€™t trust Lissa and Beren, but it doesnโ€™t hurt to be careful. It will keep the curious and inebriated out, at least. Iโ€™m not sure if news of your identity has beaten us here or not. But it wonโ€™t be long if it hasnโ€™t.โ€

That was the first time I had witnessed anyone take any precautions whatsoever. Somehow, it made me feel a bit more at ease. Not having to be aware of those around me had been unsettling, when I allowed myself to think about it. And though Ivy was an Elemental, her powers were of an arboreal nature, and I wasnโ€™t sure how much protection that could provide if necessary. Sheโ€™d just grown โ€˜tree tapeโ€™ but could she grow a wooden shield or knife if we needed it? Come to think of it, at this point, I didnโ€™t even know what her ability was. I decided to ask that, casually, if the opportunity presented itself. It all just made me think more and more of the fictional worlds I so loved. And it appeared I had stumbled into one, literally.

The wash building turned out to be more like an outhouse with a steam room built in. A bench of latrine places, separated with three-foot tall dividers lined one wall and a screen of translucent silk painted in a mountain scene divided it from the steaming stone pool that was sunken into the floor. My jaw dropped open at the bubbling bath, it looked so inviting! A couple of stone basins stuck out from the wall alongside the pool and Ivy was already soaking her cloth under the tap.

โ€œIโ€™d love to get into that, I donโ€™t feel saddle sore, but that would definitely help prevent it.โ€ I nodded toward the pool, as I tried to figure out how to make water flow from the single pipe that bent into the basin.

Ivy reached over me and pressed her thumb into a depression in the stone wall. Water began to flow, slightly warm, over the cloth in my hands. I deduced then how to adjust the temperature and the volume using the depressions I could now pick out on the wall and the tap. โ€œThat does sound like an excellent idea. As long as we donโ€™t fall too far into our cups at dinner,โ€ she gave me a lopsided smile.

โ€œOh, donโ€™t worry about that with me. I have no desire to have a big head on a horseback ride. That would be pure torment.โ€ I shook my head vehemently, remembering how I woke up in Ragaโ€™s tent that first morning. โ€œIโ€™m good.โ€

We finished up a quick toilette. The pink soap was smooth and fragrant like a bouquet of fresh roses with a rich lather. When Ivy wrung her linen out, I was astonished at how much water she extracted. The cloth was nearly dry! I did the same to my own, and by the time we reached our rooms again, it WAS dry. No real need for drying racks as such, I thought. Remarkable.

I slowed my pace a bit when we retraced our steps downstairs, taking in the scene that unfolded as I rounded the staircase. The crowd had increased, along with the din of upbeat conversation. Tankards decorated tabletops next to brawny, tanned arms amid a sea of colorful plaids. Ivy paused with a few steps to go, looking for an empty table I assumed, but Lissaโ€™s exuberant wave drew my attention. She beckoned us to a small table against the opposite wall where she stood minding a tray of food and a chilled pitcher.

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โ€œHere you are, game hen stew and a pitcher of fresh sparkly. Everything to your liking upstairs? Anything else you need, just wave me over. Gotta run just now, enjoy!โ€ Once again, Lissa snaked off into the growing crowd, calling out orders as she entered the kitchen. Ivy and I exchanged an arch look and then laughed in unison.

โ€œI couldnโ€™t have gotten a word in sideways if Iโ€™d had to!โ€ I said.

โ€œI know! Once the crowd settles in, though, sheโ€™ll visit with a tankard of her own. Lissa can drink level with any of the sawyers. Iโ€™d even put her up against someone with rock troll blood and put my wager on her. She and Beren built this tavern themselves, including milling the timber. Beren was a sawyer previously and Lissaโ€™s whole family are, she grew up in a mill. She can horse-whisper, and was responsible for the mill horses, but she loves working with wood. Most of the interior is her work.โ€

The two tiny birds steaming in thick broth with carrots, peas, onions, and potatoes was difficult to ignore up to that point. Naturally, once Ivy mentioned Lissaโ€™s work, I had to look around and see what she meant.

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Many of the tables, including ours, were made of entire round slabs of tree trunk, bark and all. Varnish sealed the tops in a thick layer as clear as glass. The bar counters were of the same idea, the rough live bark edges worn almost smooth by thirsty patrons. The more I looked, the more unique details I picked outโ€”finial carvings on the support columns, the bannister scroll work on the spiral stair, different fluting on the legs of the tables and chairs, wood burning and etching around the windows. Personal touches that gave the tavern a welcoming, lived-in atmosphere. Then my mind snagged on something else she had said.

โ€œWhatโ€™s a rock troll?โ€

โ€œI wondered if youโ€™d caught that.โ€ Ivyโ€™s green eyes sparkled with delight. โ€œThere arenโ€™t many, if any, here in Huphaea. But they are a large, resilient people who live in mountainous areas on other continents. At least on Iacewen, that I know of. They donโ€™t have any magic of their own and have been known to capture women to try to infuse magic into their population. It doesnโ€™t ever work that way, but some rock trolls keep trying anyway. Almost like they forget about the results.โ€

โ€œYou make it sound scientific, like its an experiment.โ€

โ€œI donโ€™t know that odd s-word you said, but I suppose it could be described that way, like an experiment. Or even a game to some of them. The rock troll tribe always loses, because the half-troll individual is either turned out when no magic appears, or they leave of their own accord to find more developed societies.โ€

โ€œThat doesnโ€™t sound like an intelligent approach.โ€

โ€œIntelligence isnโ€™t a rock troll specialty. Fortuantely, most of the true half-trolls gain in that way from their non-troll parent. Thatโ€™s why they all leave the cave towns.โ€

โ€œI see. So that blood confers some ability to hold a lot of drink, I take it? Would you be able to tell someone had rock troll blood just by looking at them?โ€

โ€œSometimes. Those with rock troll blood are usually larger in physical stature, with a greyish hue to their skin. But both can diminish as the bloodline dilutes and there are plenty of people with larger builds, as we see.โ€ Being in a mill town, we were surrounded by large-framed individuals in that room alone. โ€œThe only trait that gives any rock troll lineage away is gray eyes. No other race has gray eyes, so if you meet someone with gray eyes, they have enough rock troll blood to matter. And donโ€™t challenge them to a drink-off.โ€ She grinned again as she filled two flagons from the frosty pitcher.

โ€œIโ€™ll remember that. Certainly.โ€

We fell into silence for a bit, making forays into the stew with deep-bowled wooden spoons and hearty dark brown bread. The cider was crisp and on the sweeter side, but quite refreshing and it complemented the stew perfectly. I noticed the number of glances and nods in our direction increasing with the influx of patrons. I began to wonder if I was about to become a sideshow to the nightโ€™s revelry.

In general, Iโ€™m not one to go about attracting attention, so this situation made me uneasy. However, I wasnโ€™t facing a sea of hostile faces, just curious ones that probably mirrored my own. I decided that this evening was no different than any of the others I had spent in foreign countries back home. At least here I could speak the language, mostly. I used that thought as an anchor and screwed up my confidence. After all, we were all humans or elves or some combination thereof with the common threads of curiosity and, I imagine, speculation. Probably nothing would happen anyway.

Thoroughly satiated on stew, I slid my bowl to the end of the table, wondering what would come next. Should we vacate the table for other dining patrons and find a place along the wall at the drink rail if we intended to stay? My eyes flicked up to Ivy, seeking a cue from her, but she sat calmly finishing her stew and tidying the tableware.

Lissa appeared a moment later with a mousy-haired girl of about nine (or nova) in tow, a heavily carved tankard in her hand. She indicated to the girl to clear the dishes away and snagged an empty stool from a table across the aisle.

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The men at the table leaned out and around each other to sling good-natured barbs at Lissa and soon we were all laughing together.

After some hasty introductions and small talk about the day, Lissa turned back to our table and hunched conspiratorially over her tankard, her eyes alighting on me. โ€œSo, tell me, what was it like to realize you arenโ€™t where you belong? Was it as janked as I imagine it would be? Was the travel frightening?โ€

โ€œI, ah, well, if you mean was it odd, then no. One second I was walking forward into an old stone structure, the next I was in a different one. Thatโ€™s all it was. No falling, or darkness, or stretching, or voices, or light. It was just a step like any other. Only it wasnโ€™t.โ€ I had been expecting some questions at some point, but not this particular one. Lissa seemed disappointed almost, but she recovered quickly, firing off more questions until she appeared satisfied and her tankard was empty.

โ€œI should go check on Beren and the lads, hold my stool? Iโ€™ll bring another pitcher, no?โ€

โ€œSure, but only if you bring some apple crunch with it. Iโ€™ve been dreaming of it all day, I even saved room for it, and here youโ€™ve made me wait without even a mention of it!โ€ Ivy sagged back in her chair, a dramatic pout on her face for a few seconds before she winked at me.

โ€œPssshaaww! And you knew Iโ€™d make it special for you, Miss Ivy, didnโ€™t you? As if my sontrisโ€™d let me forget you were aโ€™cominโ€™!โ€ Lissa jumped up from the table, feigned offense crumbling into laughter. โ€œMark my words, youโ€™ll wake up one morning tโ€™ find my Scosy underneath your branch there at Rosewood, waiting on your wishes. Iโ€™ll be back in an erdin with your crunch and cider, my lady,โ€ and she swept a mocking bow in Ivyโ€™s direction, mirth plastered on her face.

Ivy pealed into laughter, but her face turned a shade of delicate rose pink in the wake of Lissaโ€™s words. Smiles blossomed on the faces of the men across the aisle, who had obviously been listening to Lissaโ€™s line of questioning and my replies. They knew who I was for certain now. Ivy righted herself and traced her fingers around the rim of the tankard. โ€œI do hope that doesnโ€™t come to pass. But wait until you have her apple crunch. It is fabulous.โ€

I was pretty sure I couldnโ€™t fit another bite, but the steaming apple crunch in the crock and bowl of fresh whipped cream Lissa returned with was too tempting to pass up.

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Lissa helped polish it off, thankfully, along with the pitcher of cider. The conversation turned to local matters and news of individuals both women had in common. At one point, Lissa inquired about Aymur almost shyly, which was so out of character that I picked up on it right away. โ€œHe is well,โ€ Ivy answered. โ€œGrandess Daphne keeps him busy lately since she injured her ankle. No doubt she summoned the Orderly first thing now that he is back. He was probably gathering herbs for poultices when we passed him. Unclen will be eager to see her well and back to administering. He is far too used to having his own time most days.โ€

โ€œAh, thatโ€™s why he hasnโ€™t been by lately. Some of the lads said they could use his talent in the spruce grove. The gall aphids are winding up fierce this year, they wanted a bit of reinforcement from him. Speaking of which, before you go, you should examine the center tree. It hasnโ€™t leafed as quickly as usual and one of the young ones said they could see some sap oozing way up toward the crown. Perhaps you could help? Iโ€™m sure if Porter comes in heโ€™ll ask ye to, but here then, youโ€™ve already been made aware.โ€

โ€œOf course I will, in the morning before we depart.โ€ Ivy glanced at me. โ€œStill in want for a stone bath soak? After all this food and talk I admit it sounds like a good way to cap the evening, and ensure a good nightโ€™s sleep.โ€

โ€œAbsolutely! It would be a perfect end, yes.โ€

โ€œRight then, Iโ€™ll leave you ladies to it, my thanks for the updates, Ivy. Tell Aymur to pop in next time heโ€™s round. Iโ€™ll leave two bathing sheets by the back door, grab them on your way to the bathhouse. Iโ€™ll be in at first light if you want breakfast, but donโ€™t rush on account of me. Itโ€™s my early day. Elements be, then, gโ€™tag.โ€

โ€œOh, youโ€™ll probably see Unclen before I do, Iโ€™ll be in Irillo for a while. Sounds perfect though, thank you. Elements be, Lissa, gโ€™tag.โ€

Was every meal I ate delicious, you ask? Yes! I honestly can’t think of one thing I did not like, which is highly unusual for me. Oh yes, I was super curious about that little exchange about Aymur. Lissa certainly seemed fond of him by the way she talked, she actually softened somewhat. I never did ask about her horse whispering ability, but I imagine it was as you would expect, without mind magic or Sentients. I’ll stop here for this segment. The night can continue next time!~


The Tarnished Blade sure sounds like a fun place to spend an evening, right? Do you enjoy places like that? I did before going to Huphaea, and definitely did while I was there. I was lucky enough to be in respectable establishments during my stay. Our position as Collectors would not allow anything less since it was realm business. I did hear about some rather unsavory places in Irillo, though, through the gossip channels. Let me know your tavern experiences in the comments below!

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #20

Hello Everyone! We’ve reached episode 20, can you believe it? It feels like a milestone to me, considering I wasn’t sure I could sustain a schedule with life, dogs, other work, and (little did we know) a pandemic. But I’m glad I have, it has been fun so far and I hope you are enjoying it as well ๐Ÿ˜Š. Winter presses on in this neck of the woods, we actually had some snow overnight. It should be a given here in New England, but not as much as when I was young, it seems. But my dogs are happy this morning and that is all that really matters, right? Here’s hoping all is well with you, and let’s get back to Eleanorah’s tale. You can also follow her on Twitter at @EleanorahStarr and loads of other authors too! #TeaserTuesday is a popular place to hangout โœ๐Ÿผ.

We last left the travelers in the aftermath of a discussion about magic inheritance, who is called what, and Elahna was pondering her position in the society should she have to stay. She had just concluded she would be at the very bottom, as an Ungifted. No real surprise, really, but still something to be aware of nonetheless. Let’s rejoin them on the road, shall we?~


Approaching Sawyerset. *Photo by PxHere

Shouts of a semi-raucous nature tore the forest quiet we had subsided into after the inheritance discussion. I jumped in my own skin, though Revel barely flinched. โ€œSawyersetโ€™s millmen.โ€ Ivy said, gesturing off to the right and slightly ahead of us. โ€œItโ€™s a bit late to be sending a barge downriver to Cragbend now, they must be tying it off until morning. No doubt they are eager for the end of the day.โ€

โ€œWeโ€™re almost there, then?โ€ I asked, and then mentally slapped myself. I could see the trees thinning as we progressed and the shapes of buildings materializing in the resultant space. Faint tendrils of roasting meat aromas, pine shavings, and wet earth trailed through the air. The prospect of another new place, different people, and more questions to answer set off flutters of anticipation in my chest. It was a welcome sensation that made me smile. Iโ€™d learned much on the ride today, yet I was hungry for more.

Sawyerset nestled into the northern fringe of Venrood Forest. Unlike Cragbend, select trees had been spared the axe throughout the town so that the buildings nestled in among the broad trunks. The branch canopies had been limbed up quite high to allow sunshine in, I imagined, and perhaps some cover from precipitation. Not much for crops was going to grow in the grove, though, without some magical help.

Shade plants must love this, I mused as we rode down the main street, and was delighted to see many of my favorite perennials filling up gardens and borders alongside colorful containers of impatiens, lobelia, torenia, and fuschias.

The bright colors of the flowers adorned cottages and shops constructed entirely of wood. Intricate planking patterns and the species of tree the boards were milled from provided the distinguishing features of the buildings in place of paint. I marveled at alternating herringbone patterns, diagonals, and several variations of Tudor-style using different woods.

*Photo by form PxHere

Rooflines and front fences were adorned with elaborate carvings and patterns, and here and there I saw stained window casings or fascia boards. It was colorful in an understated way that inspired comfort, warmth, and above all, hard work.

The broad, packed-earth road carved a wide horseshoe through the town, with smaller lanes trailing away toward the thicker forest. Most of the townsfolk must live off these paths as I glimpsed only a few cottages that appeared to be actual dwellings and not merchants of some sort. The middle of the horseshoe was dominated by a giant planetree, its patchy white, gray, and green bark visible from any point.

*Photo by form PxHere

Awnings dyed in bright and varied hues announced the market that filled the western half of the field, while the eastern half contained a clock tower, a well, and a fountain surrounded by woodland plants of every sort. Market-goers were wrapping up the dayโ€™s purchasing and gossip, and the stall-owners were packing their carts to head for home, or the pub on the way there. Everything I observed and sensed told me that this was a very close knit community, aware of every event that took place inside its bounds. Small-town camaraderie at its finest.

โ€œWe have rooms reserved at The Tarnished Blade,โ€ Ivy said. โ€œIt sits at the bottom right of the bend in the Shoe. This road is named the Horseshoe, but everyone refers to it as the Shoe. Directions are given in relation to the place on the Shoe, and relative to the center tree, in case you were wondering.โ€ She flashed me a wise sort of grin. I couldnโ€™t help but laugh some in return. Evidently my curiosity had made an impression on her today.

At the location she described stood a two-story tavern. It was constructed in a Tudor-esque style that paired a silver-gray wood with the framing details in another lumber of fine-grained, dark brown. The contrast of the two colors made the gray shine like a pewter mirror in the fading light of the evening. The second story kept the dark framing of the first floor, but had wide, bright, tongue-and-groove boards diagonally set instead. I noticed each window had different colored curtains in jewel tones, creating the effect of a gem-encrusted belt cinching a pale robe. Warm, golden light spilled out of the many diamond-paned windows along with hearty laughter and scents from the open doors. Half of a sawmill blade was sunk perpendicular into the door frame well above head height, painted scarlet red with blackened tooth tips. Of course, why not use the real thing for a sign?

I dismounted in the small stableyard out back, doing a similar light jig to the one in the forest to restore feeling to my feet. I tried to keep Revel between me and the pedestrians, but he evidently found my dance amusing and did his own version to draw attention to us. A lanky boy strolled in our direction, a wide grin blooming on his face. I picked up Revelโ€™s reins and murmured, โ€œOh, you are a cheeky one, arenโ€™t you?โ€ as I scratched his ears.

โ€œLong ride today, miss? Oh, Elements be, Miss Ivy, nice tโ€™ see you again. Yes, Iโ€™d imagine saddle footโ€™s got ya, if youโ€™ve been from Cragbend? Here, lemme take thems for you. Iโ€™ve stalls prepped for โ€™em since Mam said youโ€™d be with us for a night. Watโ€™s this one, heโ€™s a sharp one, eh?โ€ The grinning boy reached for both of our reins, looking Revel over as though he might sprout wings or devil horns.

“Elements be, Scosy, many thanks. You may remember Felicity, and that there is Revel. Heโ€™s young, but he shouldnโ€™t give you any trouble. He can be a bit of a sprat though, as you see. They have had a long, but excellent ride today. Make sure they get a good rubdown and extra oats, will you?” Ivy favored the youth with a wide smile, and he colored pink up to the points of his ears. She unlatched her bags from the saddle and turned toward the inn. I slapped Revelโ€™s rump lightly as he pranced away and followed Ivy.

We reached the side door through an alley way of stacked casks and crates and stepped into my imagination. The Tarnished Blade was every bit the tavern I had pictured in my mind, even more so than The Cleft Barrel had been back in Cragbend.

To our right, a lengthy bar of various heights stretched two-thirds of the way to the far wall. A very tall, yet broad-shouldered older man leaned on his elbows from behind the bar, deep in conversation with a patron. His eyes registered our entrance and his hand shot up into the air in greeting, though his conversation never paused. A plump woman burst through the set of swinging doors then, two wide, steaming bowls clutched in towels in her hands. She turned our way, nodded and smiled in greeting before confidently winding through the scattered furniture and depositing the bowls on a table that sat four men in light button-down shirts of the same plaid. She slung the towels over her shoulder and approached us, and I realized what I had taken for plump was actually stout and strong. She would have looked normal in a plaid shirt as well.

โ€œIvy, Elements be! Perfect timing, as usual. Right before the dinner rush.โ€ The womanโ€™s raised hand greeting turned into a quick, affectionate hug, which Ivy returned, and then she was steering us toward an intricately worked spiral stair at the back of the room. โ€œTake your things up, its rooms septa and octa in the far corner, theyโ€™ll be the quietest. Then have a wash, if you like, and grab a table. Iโ€™ll ferry over some stew and cider when I see ya come in. But donโ€™t dawdle, itโ€™ll fill up quick on a fine night like this. The millโ€™s ladsโ€™ll be wantinโ€™ their ale!โ€ And then she was gone, back through the kitchen doors for more orders, I supposed.

This is a good place to stop for today, the evening in The Tarnished Blade deserves its own episode. I just may put that out next week instead of waiting a week! I still marvel now at how perfect the taverns were to my imagination. To this day, I miss them. They were true community places no matter where I was in the land.~


Elahna is now a whole day closer to the capital and her situation has a bit more meaning for her. Would you be able to be as composed as she is, in her position? Comment below and let’s talk about it!

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #19

Hello Everyone! Happy New Year and welcome to 2021… I think? I hope your New Year was fun, safe, and positive, however you chose to celebrate. Did you make resolutions? How are they going? I don’t actually make resolutions. Like expectations, I think they are more-often-than-not let-downs in the end, so I don’t bother. I do turn the page, though, pack up my financials, and try to remember to write “2021.” We’re off to a rough start in many places, but here’s to moving onward and upward. That’s where I’m going. I hope you want to come along, ’cause Elahna’s got plenty of places to go this year!~

Ivy and Elahna were last chatting about family, Ivy’s kids, getting-to-know you kind of stuff. Oh yeah, and the matriarchal society part. Keep that in mind for this next chunk. It gets more in-depth ๐Ÿ˜‰.


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I continued on, โ€œI do miss my family, and I feel awful for how they must be feeling, not having any idea what happened to me, if Iโ€™m alive or dead, thereโ€™s just nothing for them to go on that would give them hope. But I have to admit, I am enjoying myself here. This world is beautiful, the magic is amazing and beyond what I thought magic could be, and the peopleโ€ฆ Everyone has been so wonderful, so understanding and helpful. Thereโ€™s also not many people compared to what Iโ€™m used to. Is Irillo a really large city?โ€

โ€œOh yes. Irillo is the largest city in Eflary. The same is true of Rusmaar for Maarran. I donโ€™t know which would be bigger, though. The older elven construction buildings make Irillo look imposing on approach, but Rusmaarโ€™s High Seat is spectacular, too.โ€

Ivy and I continued to chatter on about our worlds, falling into an easy camaraderie to the rhythm of our horsesโ€™ easy gaits. She seemed younger than me, but I still wasnโ€™t sure how time correlated with what I knew. I knew about erdurs (hours) in a anar (day), and that an anid is a year, but what is it made up ofโ€ฆ how was I going to wrap my head around that? I pulled back from the spiral of that thought line to remain attentive to the conversation.

The sun felt like it was directly overhead when we found a more open, grassy area along the road to stop for lunch. There had been a good giggle as we dismounted, stumbling with pins and needles in our feet from so long in the saddle. Felicity and Revel tossed their heads and stepped quickly out of our way as we pitched and hopped about.

Then we slipped their bits and they drifted off into the deeper shade as we unpacked a snack and ate in a relaxed, companionable silence.

*Photo by Kerterui form PxHere

As we got back underway, the horses having been refreshed from the fine grass, some of the nosebag oats, and a long drink from a forest pool, I picked back up on conversation. โ€œAre you excited to see your matris? It sounds like you havenโ€™t seen her in a while.โ€ I wasnโ€™t trying to pry, so to speak, but I was curious about this family structure, and I was tired of talking about Earth.

Ivy shrugged. โ€œSure, itโ€™s been an anid, I guess. We do send letters though. She likes to have news of Lignan and Heather. I will have a fair amount of time to myself, her council duties keep her occupied. I look forward to having some time in the city. Itโ€™s so different from Cragbend. I have friends here too that I visit with.โ€

โ€œHow long has she been on the council? Is it a lifetime service thing?โ€

โ€œAbout quinduary anids, I think. She was appointed by the House under Regna Cercis, Regna Halesiaโ€™s mother. I actually lived in Irillo with her for a while, until my nova name day, when I was called to Rosewood.โ€

โ€œSo she doesnโ€™t really get to come back to Rosewood, then?โ€

โ€œOnly if she wants to. Rosewood isnโ€™t her House. My mother is a Florian, so she returns to Hazelwick in Sagebridge on her leave. Iโ€™m only an Arborea.โ€ This last she said with her eyes downcast, like it was a condemnation.

โ€œOnly?โ€

*Photo by form PxHere

To be fair, I did feel some reticence at asking that, but I desperately wanted to understand why she seemed ashamed of that, and what it meant in the larger scheme of families. Clearly, I have spent too much time reading epic fantasy and historical fiction tales filled with political intrigue and hierarchy. Oh well.

The weight of my question hung like a granite dirigible over us, I actually shivered under it. Revel snorted and danced a step or two sideways, earning him a sidelong eyeball from Felicity.

I was just about to retract my question with an awkward apology when Ivy flashed the barest of smiles and blurted out, โ€œIโ€™m sorry, I shouldnโ€™t say that. An Elementalโ€™s power is a blessing and a gift, as there are some who are without abilities despite their parentage. They are the unfortunate ones. I am thankful for my Arborean talents.โ€ She raised her palm up as if in greeting. This time it appeared to be more in supplication, though. It was the first time I had witnessed any person performing something even vaguely religious, or perhaps pious. The topic of religion sparked another line of questions in the back of my mind. I was starting to feel like the proverbial three-year-old that everyone wants to shut up.

Ivy pulled randomly at the braids in Felicityโ€™s mane, smoothing stray strands flat, then reaching up to smooth the braids at her own temples. They were dyed a rich cocoa brown, in contrast to the very light blonde of her waist length hair. She had the two braids pulled back and fastened together at the back of her head so the upper parts held the rest of her hair off her face. Tiny bells were woven into the fastenings, which chimed softly with her movements.

The audible effect was quite soothing, I noticed, as was the visual. She had matched the color of her hair braids with the light riding leggings she wore, tying all the colors and sounds of Ivy together. It was deliberate, but so representative of the little I knew about my traveling companion. If I had had to guess her magic without knowing, a tree would have been the first thing to mind.

โ€œYou heard my Unclen and Grand Matris Daphne call us Scion Arborea. House Florian is the House we belong to, the other Scion being Herball. We have abilities relating to trees and hardwood shrubs. Herballs have magics founded in herbaceous plants. Florians, though, have abilities in both areas. A child can have one of, or both, of the House talents, or be a rare paterif, as I mentioned earlier. If a child of a Scion mother has House abilities, they are said to be increased, and it can be either natural or spontaneous. A nats childโ€™s powers are an increase over their matrisโ€™ due to the combination of both parentsโ€™ powers. A spont would be a random appearance of an increase in power in a child over the matrisโ€™ power. Does that make sense? You now explain it back to me to see if I said it right.โ€

I took a long moment to consider this. Genetics had always fascinated me, I studied it when I could in school, so I immediately reduces this to Xโ€™s and Yโ€™s in my mind to chart it out. According to her last statement, though, Mendelian genetics wasnโ€™t going to explain it all.

โ€œSo if the parents are a House and a Scion, the child would have House abilities?โ€ I asked. That would explain an increase, was there a decrease, then too?

โ€œIn many cases, yes, you would be right. That child would be a nats increase, or nats-i, we say. There is a nats decrease, nats-d, as well. Like me.โ€ She managed a small smile this time for her own description.

โ€œAnd there are also spontaneous increases and decreases? How does each parentโ€™s magic factor in to a childโ€™s abilities?โ€

She explained that yes, those individuals did exist, as spont-i and spont-d, as did nons, those born without any ability. But like any natural system, it was unpredictable because nons could have offspring with abilities. This path was the source of the common magics, those that townsfolk have. It was more like an ability to use a bit of the vitae for a certain purpose, like stirring, or lifting, instead of the ability to use vitae at will with a specific focus.

It was a tad bit confusing, but when I pondered it as I fell asleep that night, it did make perfect sense. As much as any natural system can. There was certainly class distinction in this land, but the lines blurred often. Ivy didnโ€™t mention any negative stigmas, no slurs or restrictions, except for the self-imposed ones I observed in her. And we all know how deep those can be. Knowing she felt that way, I was certain there would be more who shared the sentiments, whether in private or in the open. I would be paying close attention to this facet of society, especially since I was a true Ungifted, which was not even at the level of a nons.


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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #18

Hello Everyone! Happy last day of 2020! Whew, it has been one crazy, long, convoluted trip of a year. It will be a relief to turn the page and begin writing “2021” on everything.

How was your December holiday, whichever one you celebrate? To be honest, it was a quiet, very subdued Christmas and Christmas Eve here.

My brother, who I share a house with, tested positive for COVID-19 on the 13th, and just when he would have been cleared to come out of quarantine, my nephew tested positive as well, the Monday before Christmas. It was a lot of passing food from down here to them via an outside table, and heavily disinfected gift exchanges. Symptoms have been very light to non-existent for both of them, very thankfully, and the rest of us here have been negative. We have been fortunate, and it left us with a Christmas we won’t easily forget.

I hope you are safe and healthy where you are, with a fun plan to ring in the new year! Me, well, I’ll be sleeping, early mornings aren’t as conducive to late nights anymore, and my dogs are insistent ๐Ÿ˜†. But I have a great book picked out for the evening!

Ok, enough about reality, let’s get back to the fantasy, right? Happy New Year! Do better 2021!

Elahna and Ivy were heading down the lane away from Rosewood when we last left them, let’s rejoin them as they head through Cragbend.~


*Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash

The little town was just getting moving as Ivy and I headed toward Venrood Forest.

The healer was out in his gardens, harvesting and weeding. He raised a palm in greeting as we passed.

*Photo by pablopablo90 form PxHere

The early morning sun cloaked everything in a golden hue. Townsfolk were loading wagons with goods and produce to take to the market, and the sounds of bells on the mill horsesโ€™ harnesses signaled the start of the sawyersโ€™ day.

I knew this trip through the forest would be much different than the previous one. But that wasnโ€™t a bad thing, either.

Revel and Felicity settled into an easy trot that gave Ivy and me the ability to still talk. She seemed a bit withdrawn, so I tried to re-lighten the mood by picking up the conversation again.

โ€œHow come Lignan didnโ€™t just come with you to Irillo? Is the city a bad place for a boy?โ€

โ€œOh no, not at all. He came with me anid-last, and his patris collected him on the way home in Illedale. He travels well. Egan has a surprise for him this time, though. A horse of Lignanโ€™s own for his name day gift. He has outgrown Ebony this past anid, he has put on some height. It was Eganโ€™s idea to bring the new horse up with him to collect Lignan, that way they would have the whole ride back to Spark Island to get acquainted. I wish I was there to see his face, he will be thrilled.โ€

*Photo by form PxHere

โ€œAww, thatโ€™s so sweet. How far is it to Spark Island?โ€

โ€œItโ€™s tertia to quarta anar south to Flame Harbor, then they have to take ship over to the island. They should make pretty good time with dua strong horses, though. It is much needed time together for them. Egan will see how much work Lignan needs to do with his emotions. His Spark-ness is revealing itself more and more.โ€

โ€œDaphne said much the same thing about his letter yesterday.โ€ She shot me a narrowed look. โ€œAre Sparks dangerous or something?โ€

โ€œOh, yes. His plea letter. I apologize for that. Iโ€™m afraid I do coddle him some to keep the impulsiveness under wraps, but it doesnโ€™t always work. They arenโ€™t dangerous, as in evil, but they are fire-strong, so they tend toward quick decisions, rash judgments, fast action, dramatic emotions, that sort of thing. I found it impossibly alluring when I first met Egan, he was all heat and motion, very different from the placid coolness of the trees and forest. I only learned better once Lignan came along. Then I made sure my dual child was of a more tranquil nature. Lignan is a bright light, he just needs some instruction, thatโ€™s all.โ€

โ€œHow long will he be gone? You and Egan donโ€™t live together, ever?โ€

Ivy turned and cocked her head at me, โ€œNo, why would we live together? Iโ€™m an Arborea, I belong in Rosewood, and Egan belongs at Scorchpoint. Rosewood wonโ€™t even allow him inside. It could never work.โ€ She actually looked mildly horrified at the thought. โ€œDo you live with the patris of your children?โ€

It was my turn to be awkward then. โ€œNo, but I donโ€™t have kids, either. But most people in my world do live together as families, parents with children, that is. They raise the children together.โ€

โ€œWe raise ours within the matrisโ€™ house. Everyone in the Seat contributes to their upbringing until they reach nova, then they petition the House that fits their abilities. If it is not the same Seat they grew up in, they then leave and become part of the new Seat.โ€

โ€œBut it is always through the motherโ€™s, oh sorry, matrisโ€™ line? Does a child ever go live with their patrisโ€™ family?โ€

โ€œOnly in the case of a paterif, or line jumper, and they are quite uncommon.โ€

โ€œThat is fascinating.โ€ I grinned. A society not inclined toward a patriarchy! Finally, someone realized the logic in maternal heredity and they werenโ€™t afraid of it. I could definitely live here!

*Photo by Steve Johnson on Unsplash

I was completely enthralled with the idea of a matriarchal society, and I wondered if the human land Maarran worked the same way. It sort of had to, I imagined, since they were two halves of the same continent. And Daphne did say they intermingled freely. I was losing my desire to return home really fast.

We talked on, and I learned that Ivyโ€™s dautris was with her patpa in a town in Maarran called Duskreach, the home of the Fairmoon scion. (Which also answered my unspoken questionโ€”the human country Maarran was matriarchal as well.) The Seat name was Mesonox, and she described it like it was a permanent planetarium, it sounded truly celestial.

*Photo by form PxHere

The girl was beginning to exhibit talent with night-blooming plants and fungi even though she was only quarta. I could tell Ivy was apprehensive about this, and then she confirmed it when she said they would be making a trip next anid to Violetmere to introduce the girl to that Seatโ€™s gardens and hothouses, which contained such species. She was already preparing mentally for her dautrisโ€™s departure in quinta anids.

No where in this discussion of children and families had the word marriage come up, but I decided to leave that alone for the moment. Ivy seemed to need some topic re-direction, or perhaps a bit of time to regroup.

I turned my attention to Revel, patting his sleek gray neck. I remembered this stretch of farmland from my ride with the Bluebirds, and noticed new stacks of hay in the fields and rows ready for gathering. A herd of large, chocolate brown cattle grazed in a lush pasture along the road, barely lifting their heads at our passing.

We met several freeholders on their way to Cragbend, one with a barred cart of squealing piglets behind his produce wagon. Both horses flattened their ears at the ruckus and quickened their pace for about a quarter of a mile to leave it well behind.

Despite Kavalโ€™s misgivings, I was finding the half-saddle, stirrups and blanket combination to be quite comfortable. I found it amusing to be riding in sandals as well, remembering my riding instructor when I was twelve and her insistence on shoes with heels to prevent my feet from sliding through the stirrups. This way felt much more natural. I could be a seamless part of Revelโ€™s effortless strides.

We were approaching the edges of the forest when Ivy spoke again. โ€œYou must have so many questions, Elahna. I was just thinking to myself what it would be like to know nothing about this place we are riding through, yet being sent to Irillo to try to find out how to get back to your home. Is it frightening at all? Is your world very different? Do you miss it?โ€

I smiled at her, wanting to say something to continue the conversation, but my mind was a tumble of differences, better-thans, gripes, and misgivings. I settled for simple answers to start with.

โ€œI do have questions. Many, many questions, but I canโ€™t just ask them all up front. Iโ€™m enjoying learning as I go. I was nervous, certainly, when the Bluebirds first found me, but their warm, casual manner made me forget about it. My time with your, well, at Rosewood, has been just as supportive and welcoming. I am surprised and happy that everyone I have met so far has been willing to talk, or explain what I donโ€™t know. Including you. It wouldnโ€™t necessarily be that way in my world, on Earth. Well, not in my country, at least. Yes, my world is very different.โ€

*Photo by form PxHere

โ€œIโ€™ve heard it said that your world doesnโ€™t have magic. Is that true? How do you get things done if there is no magic?โ€ Ivy was settling into herself now. I would be glad for the full bottle of fruity smoothie to whet my throat.

We passed from the fragrances of freshly cut hay and sun-dried stacks into the scents of woodland moss and leaves. The dappled shade of the road nearer the trees offered some relief from the brilliance of the sunlight. My eyes were stinging and burning like I had been looking into LED headlights for hours. Sunglasses. I did wish I had my sunglasses.

*Photo by Herbert Goetsch on Unsplash

โ€œThatโ€™s right, we donโ€™t have magic like here, but we do have something called technology. Itโ€™s based on sciences and allows us to do most anything we need to. My world is vastly different from yours here. I donโ€™t know if I can describe it to you.โ€

I struggled a bit with what to say here because I didnโ€™t want to belittle the beautiful place I was in. Honestly, I was hoping she wouldnโ€™t ask me to explain in detail, but if she wanted to know specifics, I would do the best I could. And probably end up with a headache for it.

I’ll pick up with my reply next time, this is a good place to stop for now. Hooray for getting underway! Irillo, here we come!~


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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #17

Hello Everyone! Wow! It’s been a while since the last episode, but if you saw the MIA post, you will know why ๐Ÿ˜‰. But there is creative work to be done, so I am pushing ahead to regain a posting schedule once again. I hope this missive finds you safe, healthy, and looking forward to a festive holiday season. ๐ŸŽ„๐Ÿ•Žโ„๐ŸŽ…๐Ÿผ

We last left Elahna slumbering in her rooms in Rosewood the night before she is to embark on the journey to Irillo. She is supposed to meet Ivy Arborea in the kitchens “sometime after seisla.” Let’s pick up the story there and see what the morning has in store for her.~


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Morning dawned bright and crisp. I opened my eyes to the insistent, musical notes of a purple martin singing on the branch outside my window. He remained there, peering in at me as he trilled, until I swung my feet to the floor; then he disappeared in a flash of indigo, his task complete. I smiled, shaking my head as I opened the pocket watch and checked the timeโ€”just after 5, well, quinta.

โ€œThank you, Rosewood, that was the loveliest alarm to wake up to.โ€

The leaf shutters rustled in answer. I stretched and began my routine and preparations to leave.

Rosewood, somehow, was much warmer than Alexa or Siri, or any of the AIโ€™s we have now, even though I suppose it was potentially more pervasive. I canโ€™t quite describe it, but I was never disturbed that the manse could potentially know anything I did. There was no creepiness of being spied upon or listened in on, it just was. Right there is a statementโ€”it all has to do with intent, doesnโ€™t it?

The yellow stones, (sapphires maybe?), led me to the kitchen wing.

*Photo by form PxHere

Ivy called out as I passed the open door to a small room set up like a cafรฉ.

There was a dark, butcher-block table set out with baskets of rolls and breads, crockery jars of butter and jams, wedges of cheese, baskets of eggs, plates of bacon, a bowl of beautiful fruit, carafes of juices, and the accoutrements for coffee or tea. Five or six sets of tables and chairs filled the room opposite a raised stone hearth, where a small fire burned.

Ivy sat holding a cup of something warm between her hands. Coffee, I determined as I laid my pack beside hers at the door and greeted her.

No mittens for Ivy, though. *Photo by form PxHere

โ€œSleep well?โ€

โ€œI did, yes, deeply Iโ€™d say. And I was woken by the sweetest purple martin outside my window. You?โ€

She smiled and put down her mug, โ€œYes, I did, and he woke me too. Rosewood must have sent him to me first, knowing I would need more time to extract myself from Lignan. Help yourself to the spread, and donโ€™t be afraid to take some extra for the journey if you want. We wonโ€™t see Sawyerset until this evening.โ€

I helped myself to some bread, really wanting to make toast, and then I realized what the raised fire was for. A few minutes later, I had an entire cooked breakfast of eggs, a couple slices of bacon, and perfectly browned toast. The little flame was hot, precise, and cooked items perfectly with only a pass or two through it on a thin metal plate or the grilling grate. Faster than any gas stove or toaster.

I sampled a dark red juice that turned out to be a smoothie, and decided I would be filling my corked bottle with that for the ride. It was an amazing combination of berries, I guessed. It would be perfect for a summer picnic lunch.

We finished our food and packed our extras away. Ivy eyed my rucksack as I kept stuffing things into it, and its shape never changed.

โ€œA spelled sack, great idea. Especially since you will have to wear it the whole way because Revel is so touchy. Iโ€™ll help you settle it on your back before you mount so it adjusts to you and feels weightless. I should have thought of that myself.โ€ She frowned a little at her saddlebags, which were obviously spelled as well, with the amount she was stuffing into them. โ€œPerhaps I can find one in Irillo for the ride home.โ€

That excellent spelled rucksack! *Photo by Alex Azabache on Unsplash

โ€œHow long are you staying there?โ€

โ€œNo idea. Matris summoned me, but Iโ€™m not sure why. Perhaps she is just lonely for the country, though, and for Arborea news. Sheโ€™s on the Eanneadic Council, so she has to spend most of her time there advising the Queen. But I know she misses the quiet of her home outside Irillo. And she knows my young ones are with their patres, so it is the perfect time for me to go.โ€

We reached the stable then, and I thought to mark the place in that conversation to pick it up again once we were on our way.

Arlen danced out to meet us, and I could hear whistling along with the slicking sound of a horse being brushed. Kaval had Revel and Felicity out, tacked, and waiting for us in the main aisle, running a last brush over their coats to make them shine.

โ€œAh, there you are. Right on time. Arlen woke me early, said youโ€™d be heading out afore septa, so I got them ready for you. Sheโ€™s assured me theyโ€™ve promised to get along and be proper. I donโ€™t want to be let down.โ€ The last was said with a pointed look at Revel.

He handed us a couple nosebags of oats for the long afternoon stretches, and we swung up onto the horses out in the yard. My pack really did feel like nothing more than a sweatshirt on my back once Ivy adjusted it properly. She placed the oatbags in there as well, and it shifted a bit, but never registered any more weight. Iโ€™d had no idea the backpack could do all this when I bought it, but I was very glad I had gone back for it. And thankful to Daphne and Aymur.

We said ‘Elements be’ to Kaval, and trotted down the drive. I noticed Ivy glance up to the middle of the manse and blow a kiss to a small figure in a window. Lignan, I guessed. He held up his hand, then turned quickly away.

And so we were off! I remember feeling nervous, but really happy to be moving along toward some answers about my situation. And I REALLY wanted to see Irillo. I’ll leave it here for now, Ivy and I talked a lot on the ride, so there’s lots to tell of what I learned from her in the next few segments. It won’t be long until I post next, I promise!~


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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #16

Hello Everyone! Does it seem to you that the months go faster as we approach the end of the year? October has vanished, which means I’ve been too busy to notice it. We have had some odd weather for New England, but also some perfect fall days, which I am thankful for. The foliage colors have been vibrant and long-lasting, as long as there is no wind. But here we are on the week leading up to a full moon on a Halloween Saturday!

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I wonder how many people still have that candy that appeared in the stores in July…

This is another audio only episode, a continuation of the last and lots of dialogue with not much to illustrate, so audio is the better format. I enjoy making the audio episodes, I hope you find them fun too. Enjoy your week, and Happy Halloween and Samhain. Trick or treat!~

The last audio episode had Elahna returning from a day in Cragbend to meet a Sentient horse, Arlen and become embroiled in a horse-horsemaster disagreement. Arlen won; no surprise, really, she knows her business. Elahna had returned to her room afterward to freshen up for dinner, so we will pick it up there….~

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That was quite a dinner, right? The food in Huphaea was always incredible, it is one of the things I miss most. Do you think Elahna and Ivy will gel on the ride to Irillo, or will it be awkward? At least the horses seem to have things sorted out, thanks to Arlen. I never did find out how young Thorn made out, but I would wager his days got a whole lot more regimented. I have to say part of me wanted to stick around to see his mother, Larix, just because of how Daphne made her sound. But I had bigger things to tackle. It will be on toward Irillo next time!~


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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #15

Hello Everyone! Welcome to October. Falling leaves, pumpkins and cornstalks, long sleeves, and Halloween candy are now everyday sights. Here is a photo of my nephew’s roadside stand here at our farm:

He grew the pumpkins himself, from field prep to harvest, with his own equipmentโ€”he’s thirteen. He’s done pretty well so far, weekends clean him out and he has to restock. Proud aunt here!

This episode will be audio only. I haven’t done audio since the very beginning, so it was time to brush off the mic and put it to use. This segment is also dialogue-heavy and I thought it may work better in audio form. I hope you enjoy it, I had fun reading it for you. Be well!

We left Elahna on the road back to Rosewood Manor from a day in Cragbend. She had just seen some color-changing frogs in the clutches of children under the bridge. This episode includes more animals, but before I give anymore away, hit the PLAY button below and give it a listen. Then let me know what you think!~


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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #14

Hello Everyone! Aime here, I wanted to start this post by saying Thank You to all of you for following my story. It means so much to have your support for this bit of creativity that flows out of my overactive brain. It is what keeps any writer going and putting out content on any given day. You are the best! Now, here’s Eleanorah…


Hey Everyone, nice to see you back! I hope autumn (or spring, as it may be) is treating you well. Here, it is painfully dry, we are in a moderate-to-severe drought and plants of all types are suffering. Thankfully, it is nearing leaf-drop anyway, so the colors New England is famous for are progressing, a bit more quickly than normal. Things change color overnight, and wow, the poison ivy is spectacular! Here are a few pics I took while walking Dash a mile down the hill from me:

I do love fall, though I fight to hold on to the summer sun, and this weekend should be perfect for that. I may have to start doing rain dances, a couple rainy days would be welcome. Landscaping is slowing down, so that means more time for writing and maybe a couple other ideas as well…. Anyway, let’s get back to Cragbend and Elahna, it’s much more fun there.~

We left Elahna after she had just purchased that sweet new rucksack. I miss that bag, I wish it had crossed back with me, but of course it couldn’t. What’s next in her day? Ready to find out? OK, let’s go!


Back out on the main road, I turned right, back toward the clock tower. A sign with a pink frosted cupcake caught my eye, and I remembered Aymurโ€™s comment on peach tarts. I pushed open the bright blue door and entered the North Pole of sweet shops. It smelled of spun sugar, birthday cake, and chocolate. My mouth began to water like Pavlovโ€™s dogs.

Sweetnic’s sign

โ€œElements be, aye fla, what sweetnics can I tempt you with?โ€

A thin man with wavy hair that resembled fudge in a bowl hailed me as I entered. His apron was stained with smears of icing and jelly in every color, and powdered sugar coated the backs of his fine-boned hands. I wondered how he could possibly be so slim working in a place like this all day, but then I noticed the huge sacks of flour and sugar, and barrels of fruit that lined the walls and tables of the bakery. If he mixed them all, he wouldnโ€™t have time to eat! But wouldnโ€™t there be magic at work here too?

โ€œElements be, Aymur Arborea told me I had to have a peach tart from Sweetnicโ€™s before I left. Am I in the right place?โ€ I smiled as I looked before me at the cooling pastries and cookies.

In the back of the shop, a young man stood waving his hands over a long table where a lengths of rainbow colored candy writhed and twirled in response. It was like watching bolts of cloth being drawn and cut into ribbons. When he had the lengths at a certain size, he spun his wrist around and the candy twirled into unicorn horns, or knots, or balloon-animal shapes. Then he stuck a cinnamon stick or a waxed cord into them. A small girl next to him plucked them out of the air and put them on racks to cool.

Photo byย formย PxHere

The man before me chuckled a little, drawing my attention back. โ€œWhy yes, you are! Aymur stops in for a peach tart every time heโ€™s in town. Is that all youโ€™d like?โ€

The tiny cakes and chocolate truffles winked at me, I swear, and the cookies flashed their dark, molten chips at me. But I resisted and replied, โ€œYes, thank you, but I will take two, if I may? Are you Rennay?โ€

โ€œAs you like, fla, yes, I be Rennay, crafter of all that is sweet. Who might you be?โ€ He answered in a pleasant tone as he wrapped two flaky, pink sugar-coated tarts and handed me a thin, foil bag. The foil was warm as a baking sheet, but the warmth did not linger on my fingers after they left the bag.

โ€œIโ€™m Elahna. Iโ€™m a guest of Lady Daphne for a day or two. How long will this stay warm?โ€

โ€œHow long do you need it to? Certainly through tomorrow morning, if you can make them last that long. You can replenish at my kinsmanโ€™s shop in Sawyerset, though, so no need to draw out the delight.โ€ Rennay winked at me, he knew just who I was.

โ€œThank you, ok, I will do that. Do you make all of this yourself?โ€

The selection of baked goods and poured candies was incredible. Most pieces looked to be individually crafted, but the amount of time that would take would be impossible. Rennay must have magic he uses.

*Photos byย formย PxHere

โ€œYes, with my sontres and dautris, dua of whom are there,โ€ he waved at the back of the shop, โ€œand the tertiar is out on errands. I have other helpers when they are occupied at their matrisโ€™s or in Sawyerset.”

โ€œSo you have magic, too.โ€ My statement wasnโ€™t really supposed to be heard, but I guess I said it aloud.

โ€œOh yes, but not a lot, we arenโ€™t Elementals, but for simple things like mixing and shaping, common talents that help us in our lives and trade. Like Toscan is doing there, spinning candy.โ€

โ€œI see. Everything is so beautiful. I would hesitate to eat it because it looks like art or toys.โ€ I saw a slight frown quirk his lips, and I hastily continued, โ€œBut Iโ€™m sure I would forget about that once I tasted it.โ€ I smiled again, hoping to bury the slight I must have given. Ugh.

Now, I can see where that comment might have caused him to frown, but it was true! The cakes looked like stuffed bunnies and chicks, fluffy and bright yellow and white, with ribbons around their necks and whiskered noses. The candies resembled packages, animals, other food items, and celestial bodies. If I didnโ€™t know they were confections, I would have thought they belonged on a shelf, or in a childโ€™s toy box.

I paid for the tarts and agreed to convey tidings to Aymur.

Back at the clock tower, I noted the time as one-thirty to me, so half terdecca? Still loads of time, and I really wanted a quiet spot to process all I had learned that morning. The sound of the water wheel caught my attention again, so I followed the lure.

The road past The Cleft Barrel was subdued compared to the bustle of the Sagebridge road. On the right, I passed a tidy cottage framed by fenced gardens that teemed with color and vegetation. The sky blue sign had a rainbow in an upper corner and a mortar and pestle front and center.

The Orderly’s sign

Ah, probably the Orderly. I slowed and recognized many of the plants as healing herbs. Bright purple scapes of lavender, tight carpets of mother-of-thyme, and bold leaves of castor bean stood out as I wandered past, along with scents of mint, chamomile, and anise hyssop. In places, the unruly plants covered the pebbled paths, but in others, the herbs were cut neatly revealing rich brown mulch.

*Photos byย formย PxHere, except thyme image credit Alan Levine on PxHere.

A pedestal that looked like a small altar stood in the center of one of the blocks; I had noticed similar pieces in front of other buildings too. It could easily have held a sun dial or other garden ornament, but something about the individuality of each one I had seen suggested religion, or honor. I stopped then and looked aroundโ€”there was no church-type building in the center of town, where I would expect one to be. Nature worshippers, perhaps?

Past the Orderlyโ€™s property, (which I noted had every square inch planted with herbs or edibles of some sort), there was a thin trail that wound off into the grass. The building before me was a mill of some sort, with the luring water wheel splashing off seconds in the sparkly river.

I followed the trail which ended on the riverbank. Setting my pack down under a small tree, I collapsed in the grass on my back.

*Photo byย formย PxHere

I laid there for a few moments listening to unfamiliar birdsongs and inhaling the earthy scents to the backdrop of the waterwheelโ€™s beat. Everywhere I went there was a vibrancy, a vitality and a positivity that permeated the air, even.

I could only describe it as the feeling you have on the first day of vacationโ€”so full of energy, promise, activity, confidenceโ€” you know that feeling, right?

When my senses could hold no more sensations, I sat up and retrieved the foil pack. It was still oven-warm, the tarts soft and light in my hand. Aymur was right, it was an amazing peach tart. I wanted to scarf both of them down in a sticky, sweet minute, but I only ate half of one and re-stowed them.

My new rucksack should have been quite full with all I had stuffed inside, yet plenty of room remained, and it wasnโ€™t heavy to carry at all. Bespelled again? Most likely, but I wasnโ€™t complaining. This magic here certainly had its advantages. Ungifted though I was, I would employ it in the forms I could!

After a brief nap, I stretched and faced upstream, toward the mill. No sound of giant stones grinding together reached me, only that of splishing water, so perhaps it was a wool or textile mill.

*Photo byย formย PxHere

Beyond that, the river widened way out into a pond, or a bay, if such could be on a river. I heard shouts every once in a while, and could see patches of color moving around, which I assumed to be people. They appeared to be moving around in familiar patterns, and then I saw a large boatโ€”a barge?โ€”creep into the middle of the bay. It was a large, flat vessel poled on either side by a man, away from me and the mill. Then a team of horses, big draft horses, emerged from the shade of a copse of trees on either bank. There must be another town upstream that they were returning to. Rennay had mentioned somewhere called Sawyerset on the road to Irillo, perhaps I would find out tomorrow.

I watched the activity upstream for a while and decided it must be a wood mill, which only made sense with Cragbend being the Arborea Seat, and the predominance of wooden construction everywhere. Occasionally I caught a slight scent of wood shavings, or burning wood, so that must be it. But where there didnโ€™t appear to be electricity here, it would all be hand-sawn work, or magic. Like the woodworker with the carriages. Yes, magic.

I indulged in a quiet couple of hours by the river before heading back to Rosewood Manor.

As I crossed the bridge over the river, I saw three young children under the bridge, catching frogs and squeezing them to make them turn colors.

It was actually quite entertaining. I stopped on the bridge to watch them. The frogs were great fat things, and when squeezed, if they didnโ€™t belch or emit fecal material to the boysโ€™ delight, they turned any random shade of color. And if they were squeezed again, the color would change.

I’ll leave it here for now, the day isn’t over, but my trip to town is. See you next episode!~


A backpack that never fills up? What student couldn’t use that? I do wish it could have crossed back with me. The heated foil was super handy too, you could have warm bread whenever you wanted. Would you have done anything different in a new town? Comment below and let me know.

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #13

Hello Everyone! If you are here in the US, hopefully you had a splendid Labor Day weekend and are coming to terms with summer drawing to a close. I am not there yet, still holding on to sun, the hammock, and sandals. Obviously, I’m not in Colorado, and if any of you are… just wow ๐Ÿ˜ฒ. I don’t know how I would handle that crazy temperature and precipitation swing, but I know my Akita would be happy! Schools are resuming all over the globe now, fingers crossed that we aren’t back in lockdown again because of it. Stay safe, and don’t get sucked in by the Halloween candy already in the stores (for several weeks now ๐Ÿ™„)…

When we last left Elahna, she was in between the baker and the boys who stole some bread. Remember the thrown rolling pin? Okay, that’s where we will pick the story up…~


*Photo byย formย PxHere

โ€œThorn Arborea! Iโ€™ll be having a chat with your grandess! You can be sure of it!โ€ The baker recovered his implement from the dirt and started brushing it off. Then he noticed me standing there a bit astonished.

โ€œConsarned boys. Theyโ€™re nothing but trouble, those three. But mostly that Thorn, heโ€™s aptly named. โ€˜Bout time he was sent off for some โ€˜prenticing, thatโ€™s what I think. A bit too stuffy for my like, he is.โ€

โ€œDo they do this often?โ€

โ€œThatโ€™s the quarta time this anos. I havenโ€™t said anything to Lady Arborea to this point, just to him and the matres of the other two. That will change now. Quartaโ€™s the number of preparation, and young Thorn needs a reminder. Thatโ€™s my part for the future.โ€

โ€œI wouldnโ€™t blame you at all. Typical teenagers, but annoying nonetheless.โ€ I turned back toward the shop with him. He shot me an odd look, but held the door for me to enter.

Photo by Corinne Kutz on Unsplash

Breads and cakes filled every possible surface within the bakery. A woman with dark hair piled on top of her head and bare arms white to the elbow with flour glanced up as we came in.

โ€œHe got dua loaves,โ€ she said, shaking her head.

โ€œI know, Iโ€™ll head to the manor when this bowl is cut and stored.โ€ He tossed the dirty rolling pin into a soapy sink. I took in all of the various baked goods and tried to keep from drooling. โ€œNow then, what can I help you with?โ€ He managed to force a slight smile in my direction.

โ€œUm, well, how about one of those large cookies, and one of those round breads?โ€

*photos by pxhere.com/

I hadnโ€™t meant to get anything here, but I felt compelled to, given what Iโ€™d witnessed and how the baker had confided in me.

โ€œOf course.โ€ He wrapped my selections in brown paper and placed them on the counter, looking at me expectantly.

My cheeks heated some and I withdrew the pouch from my pocket. Time to own up to my ignorance and hopefully not be robbed.

โ€œIโ€™m sorry, Iโ€™m not familiar with the worth of these coins and pearls. Can you tell me what they are worth and what I owe you?โ€ I dumped the contents into my hand.

The bakerโ€™s eyes widened for a split second and then he looked at me with a clear, steady gaze. โ€œYouโ€™re the Passer, are you?โ€

The womanโ€™s head shot around again, but her gaze softened and she moved to the sink to wash her hands. She stepped to the counter still drying them as he replied, โ€œWell, you have enough here to buy yourself a room at the Barrel for a good few aneks, I dare say. Here, Iโ€™ll break down una of these golds so you can be more comfortable buying.โ€ He took a box from under the counter and started counting coppers out.

โ€œSee, these are called holecops.โ€ The woman held up a copper with a hole in it. โ€œThat bread you have is una holecop plus seis coppers, and the cookie is seis coppers, so the total is dua holecops.โ€ She waited for me to take that in.

โ€œOk, thank you. So one holecop is the same as twelve coppers, er, or however you say it. I can remember that.โ€ The man replaced the box and now handed me many more coppers of both sorts, six holecops and twenty-four coppers. My pouch was going to be much heavier now.

โ€œHolecops are represented by this,โ€ and she pointed to an X with three lines across it. โ€œAnd coppers by this,โ€ which was a plain X.

I learned the other symbols later, this was enough to get me through the day though, as they said. I thanked them again, and as I turned to go, I noticed something moving in the huge bowl the woman had been working over. Two wide paddles plunged and folded the white dough though she was nowhere near it. I stopped and stared, then caught her grinning at me as she retrieved the paddles and set about kneading once again. I gave her a sheepish smile back and left.

How cool would that be, to make your kitchen tools carry on without you? Imagine how much I could get done! It seemed like magic played some part in everyone’s everyday lives.

The house across the road turned out to be a wood turner, with everything from utensils to bowls to banister tops displayed in and outside of his shop. There was also a tailor, and a country store of sorts, where you could buy flour, salt, bicarbonate, lye, and the like to make what you needed to. The open market I saw from the tree-top occupied a grassy field beyond the tailor, and obviously served as a secondary town center. People congregated in groups talking, laughing, and browsing. I hesitated, not really wanting to be noticed, but the bright colors of tunics and the smell of worked leather warmed by the sun drew me in anyway.

I meandered through the market noticing many, many items I would love to have. The market reminded me of the craft fair my motherโ€™s church held every fall. Tables and cart beds brimmed over with handmade items of clothing, cookware, linens, cured meats, vegetables and fruits, hot popped corn and honeyed nuts in paper sleeves, decorations, and knick-knacks. I knew, though, that most items in this market were practical and for everyday use; the market was the shopping mall of this era.

I saw cast-iron skillets in sizes from one egg to half a pig, and in innumerable shapes. And on top of that, I overheard the iron-worker tell a burly man, (perhaps a tavern owner?), that he would re-form anything to any shape desired. Really? After seeing the woodworking done on the Bluebirdsโ€™ wagons, I would be keen to see metal workers.

My pouch was bursting with coins and pearls, I swear they were burning a hole on my hip where it rested. The baker had indicated I carried a small fortune in there. It was difficult, but I reined in my shopping-spree eyes and settled for a very few practical items that I didnโ€™t feel guilty buyingโ€”a second set of undergarments woven from the softest, finest linen, a deep purple leather thong with a wooden pin affixed to the end of it for pinning back my hair, and three of the largest, darkest blood oranges I had ever seen. The fruit itself was the size of a size three soccer ball, and so dark inside that it was nearly black. Each would easily be two meals, but after tasting the sample the grower gave me, I could not resist.

Earth’s small versions of blood oranges. *Photo byย formย PxHere

โ€œPardon, would you have anything I could store the unused portion of the fruit in to keep it fresh? I canโ€™t possibly eat a whole one at once, and I will be traveling for a few days.โ€ I was hoping for a bag or container of some sort, or that she would point me to another person who had such.

But instead, she took the oranges, tossed each one into the air individually, froze it there, and encircled her hands around it without touching it. Then she let them go one-by-one and returned them to the bag. She held them out, โ€œThere you go, those should keep for an anek, if you need.โ€ The bag itself was woven of grasses and was cool to the touch.

โ€œThank you, elements be.โ€

I now had several parcels of different sizes and shapes to carry, which was getting awkward. I would need a backpack or something to carry my few possessions in on the journey to Irillo, so I stood for a minute in the trodden center of the rectangular space and assessed the vendors for who might have such an item. I had seen some beautiful, cinched oilskin sacks at the leather workerโ€™s earlier, and decided that would be the most sensible thing to have; then weather wouldnโ€™t be as much of a concern, if inclement weather during the day was really a concern here. A truly unfathomable thing for a New Englander like me, but it would be a welcome relief!

A similar pack to mine, but not quite. *Photo by Alex Azabache on Unsplash

I left the market with my purchases safely stowed in my new oilskin backpack. The body of it was of a richly dyed navy leather with russet straps, ties, and cord stitching. It had a cinched top with a buckled cover flap and oiled canvas straps that seemed to adjust to my shoulders by themselves. I thought to ask if it was spelled to fit comfortably, but decided natives would already know that, and thanked the crofter again. I was very pleased with my practical self, and hoped Aymur would approve of how I used the money as well.

I’ll leave it there for now, I will continue wandering around Cragbend next time. There’s more to see and do here!~


I was dying to know what would happen to Thorn when Daphne finds out about his activities, she seemed like someone not to cross. It was hard not to go crazy in that market, would you have been able to keep the spending down? I wish I still had those garments, they were so light and comfortable. What would you have purchased in that situation? Leave a comment below so we can talk about it!

In some other news,ย Quill & Orb Press, (the fiction part of my word services business), is ready to doย developmental editsย andย copyeditingย forย YOU! Fantasy, paranormal, YA, historical fiction, and other genres welcome.

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The Great Collection of the Elemental Families of Huphaea, anid 1830 #12

Hello Everyone! There’s a cool breeze wafting in my window as I type, it feels sort of likeโ€”I can’t say itโ€”fall? Yikes! It won’t be long now until I put the pool away, but while the sun is still warm, I’ll be out in my hammock. I hope all is well with you in your corner of the world, and let’s get on with the exploring, shall we?

When we left Elahna, she had just returned from her trip to the top of Rosewood Manor. Let’s see what other mischief she gets herself into.~


back in my rooms…

I stopped back in my room, since Rosewood had so conveniently deposited me there, thinking to grab stuff for a day in town, but then I remembered I didnโ€™t have anything! What an odd feeling. The summer-appropriate clothes I wore had all been given or loaned to me these past three days, I had no personal supplies and no money. Indebtedness was adding to the anxiety I chose to bury in discovery. Iโ€™d have to sort that out soon. I hoped the queen would have some ideas of how I could be useful while I was here. Hopefully one that didnโ€™t involve indentured servitude or work campsโ€ฆ. So far this society didnโ€™t feel like a cruel, vindictive one, but I shouldnโ€™t get my hopes up.

For now, I was glad I had been practicing โ€˜living in the presentโ€™ and being concerned with what I could control at any given moment. And oddly enough, right now what I had to control was time. Oh, the ironyโ€ฆ

In the back of my mind, yes, I was worried about what my parents and brother were thinking. Especially since I was sure someone would have discovered my car left there in Vermont. I hadnโ€™t really said where I was going, though, cause I wasnโ€™t sure myself. My bike would be harder to find, but if my mom remembered that I was seeking a rumored megalith someone was bound to know where I would end up. It would look so much worse than it really was, I felt awful at how scared and upset they would be. I was also glad I hadnโ€™t yet gotten the puppy I was planning to.

After a quick re-set of my hair in a ponytail, I decided to find Aymur before I left the manor. Perhaps he had a time-keeping device I could borrow for the day so that I didnโ€™t miss the evening meal. On my way back out the the door, something caught my eye on the side table. A small green pouch and a silver disc on a chain sat with a card bearing my name.

Once again, the generosity of these people left me speechless. A few metallic clinks sounded from the pouch, but there was more in it than that. I took it over to the bedspread and upended it, not knowing what to expect. Four copper coins like to quarters with holes in the middle, four white pearls the size of an eraser, two pink pearls a bit bigger than the whites, an iridescent bauble with sides (a dodecahedron?), three gold circles like O-rings the same size as the coppers, and two silver crescents about half-dollar size tumbled out. Well, this would be interesting, hopefully I wouldnโ€™t overpay too much for a tart.

*photos from pxhere, except three gold rings from Deena England on Unsplash

The pocket clock was simple yet striking. The silver cover clicked open when I pushed the tiny catch and revealed a flat dial with numbers one to twenty-seven in a circle. The transparent bronze arrow in the center spun around and sprang to a stop at half ten. I wondered what kind of stone the arrow it was, Iโ€™d have to ask about that too.

I swept the money back into the pouch and put both items in my pocket. I still had erdurs before dinner. Time to explore Cragbend!

As I left the manor I encountered the young boy, Lignan, from the night before. He stopped so that we didnโ€™t have to walk through the door together, holding it for me, and I could have sworn I heard a mumbled โ€œSorry for what I wroteโ€ as I passed. I nodded slightly in thanks and continued down the cobbled apron onto the dirt drive. Moments later, he ran past me and off toward the horse paddocks.

Image by Roger Bradshaw on Unsplash

The walk to Cragbend proper took about half an hour. I crossed an ornately carved wooden bridge at the Sawyerโ€™s Run Inn that put me in view of the crossroads. Most likely that was the riverโ€™s name, which would make sense, given the barge scene I saw from the treetop. The smell of roasted vegetables and meat surrounded the inn, making my mouth water. How could I be hungry after the lavish breakfast Iโ€™d had? But man, that smelled heavenly.

People nodded and smiled, sometimes palming a greeting. I returned it, trying to hide my observation of ears and other elvish features. I wondered how many of Cragbendโ€™s citizens had elemental powers and how many were, what did Daphne call them, Ungifted? Was there animosity between the Gifted and non? She didnโ€™t seem to indicate it, but then again, she obviously had gifts aplenty, so why would she. Iโ€™d have to try a little sleuthing of my own.

Cragbend clock tower

A large stone clock tower outlined with dark wood in Tudor-esque style marked the center of town. It was one of the few stone items I had seen so far here. The smooth facade gleamed cream with pink streaks in the bright sun. A large, triangular shaped crystal of the same bronze stone as in my pocket clock glinted in the clock face, pointing just after the eleven. It still felt like the days were the same length as home, it was so hard to tell when my frame of reference was gone.

There was something remarkable about the sun here. The light it gave off was of an intensity that made me expect it to be unbearably hot, but it wasnโ€™t. It felt like a June summer day in New England, no humidity, perhaps around 80 degrees. Was that the weather workersโ€™ doing? How much did they have control of? Did they plan a weekโ€™s weather (um, an anekโ€™s weather, I should say) like a menu? When did it rain? It must be frequently, with the lushness of the land and the healthy haystacks I noticed. I had never felt so unknowledgeable before.

So many questions I had, canโ€™t you imagine? No, I didnโ€™t have an escort or anything, I didnโ€™t need one. No one mentioned any threats or things to watch out for. Kind of telling thatโ€™s what we think of first, right? Come to think of it, I hadnโ€™t even seen any guards in Rosewood Manor. I guess with a living house that could help when it was needed, people defenders were unnecessary. Iโ€™d hate to think what that house could do to an intruder.

The field next to The Cleft Barrel stood empty, the Bluebirds had moved on to their next stop. I felt a pang of sadness at that, but it was replaced by the hope that I would see them again someday. Maybe the other Madrigal troupes too, so I could compare all of their shows. Perhaps a festival. Surely a society with such amazing performers would hold festivals, right?

Since I knew the road to the right headed back to Venrood Forest, I took the left fork. One of those many pointed signs indicated that somewhere down the road were places called Sagebridge, Arrowbreak, and Crescenton. I wondered what they were like. Were they family seats, too? I could hear the rhythmic splashing of a water wheel not far away, and maybe the grinding of millstones? The scents of cooling bread enticed me as I passed a bakery, no wonder as plump baguettes filled racks just inside the windows. Even the carved sign of a steaming loaf above the door looked good enough to eat!

Photo by form PxHere

Just then the door of the bakery flew open and three boys scampered out, a stout baker hot on their tails. As the boys rounded the corner toward me and the road, the one in front, a black-haired boy in green shirt and gray knee breeches, reached in the window and snagged two of the baguettes. They took off down the street in the direction I was headed, hooting and laughing. The bakerโ€™s rolling pin clocked the slowest boy in the back of the shoulder, but he did not slow.

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Wow! That was a surprise! And there I was, caught in the middle! We’ll find out next time what happened ๐Ÿ˜‰.~


And there it was, the first bit of mischief or dissent that I had witnessed since arriving. I did feel bad for the baker, but it was a great throw of the rolling pin! The money, though, I wasn’t sure what to make of that, it was so different. I’ll tell you what I learned about it next time. What would you do in a new town in a new world for several hours? Drop a comment in the box below and we can talk about it ๐Ÿ™‚.

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